heya this was a great story from start to finish!
keep writing, you clearly have a talent for it!


"Fan Fiction is a really great distraction from the sometimes harshness of reality."- destiny062

first off I'm loving this story a lot. second I just have one problem with this chapter. I love how Luke is trying to explain baseball to the girls. But.. there is something that I want to correct. Not sure if your a baseball fan so please don't get offended.. The only time the Yankees and Red Soxs would play seven consecutive games is the Playoffs (most likely in the second round in the ALCS) and if either team wins the best of seven they advance to the world series. other wise that' s correct. even though I take offense to the whole Steinnbreiner issue. It's called good business.

SEQUEL PLEASE

where'd they land on the kids thing?

no why wouldn't they want kids?

Hi! I think this is a really good story. Just a suggestion, maybe you want a little glimpse of an Emily that can get along with Lorelai? Even if it's followed by a huge fight or, like in season one around Rory's birthday they manage to spend a nice day shopping and come to a sort of understanding, at least for a little while? Just something you might want to consider. And tell your beta that she is doing a good job. and why would someone date Kirk's brother and then date KIRK?! Something has to be wrong with them.

cute

Another great story. I'm a huge fan of the luke/lorelai pairing, if you can't tell by my name :) great job!

I have read this story before, and I LOVE it, but just so you know Scott Patterson(Luke) played for the Yankees. But I don't really have a favorite baseball team, so it's all good.

I love that story! You should make a sequel! I would pay a million dollars to read it!(the million dollars would be monoply money!)

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! It is great! This is the second time I've read it, and I still LOVE it!

OMG i couldn't stop reading until i was done with the entire story! i was hooked this was the greatest fanfiction i have ever read! you have a talent and i enjoyed every part of it!

41-Ah, ha I have decided that Lex (and Rory) are both just really smart people!! Great chapter, he needs to try and fix things!
42-Aww...how sweet. I loved it! You should so do a season 5 sequel...since this was supposed to be season 4...pretty please. I loved this! It was the best chapter yet and it was totally great!

36-Stupid cliffhangers. Great chapter, I loved it. But I hate it when they fight!! I think that Lex seemed nice. But well, calling Lorelai Lori wasn’t really nice.
37-I cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I cannot believe she just ran out and didn’t answer him. That is not cool, but I guess if she is still undecided then that is understandable.
38-This chapter depressed me b/c it was way super sad. But it was a well written chapter and it was good, just sad.
39-He had better not hook up with Lex, b/c that would be not cool, and as you said, he still loves Lorelai. Another great sad chapter.
40-Ahh, now I have to know what she is going to get him for Christmas. She had better find him and say yes, b/c she loves him more than coffee and that is way big!!

31-I think I may like this new-ish Emily. She seems to be nicer...like sorta. Well I know what I mean...anywayz, great chapter!!
32-Wow, that had to be some kind of major step in the right direction for Emily and Lorelai. I mean Emily gave Lorelai advice, and she didn’t totally ignore it!!
33-Great chapter…my friend who is here with me loved it also! She like the running the fingers up her leg thing. lol.
34-Hey, so I really liked this chapter. Lorelai had better stay with Luke and push the issue, b/c there is no way that she can have kids with another man...b/c that is just bad!!
35-That was certainly an interesting Thanksgiving. Great chapter, and overall, it could have went worse. I like Charlie. He seems nice.