ooh i agree it is dark but it could be a little darker but it is the prolouge still great fic

I think this would be a great story, so r u going to wright more?

Nicely written first chapter...dark stories are always a treat. Please continue.

It is good, it sets the mood for what promises to be another great story!

I like dark stories! Don't worry about it. It's VERY good so far! I love these kinds of stories! Please write more! You know how much I love your stories.