A great story. Very good.

Hey Pat!

Very much like the story. Very thought provoking. Some grammar seems a bit weird though, but other than that it was very high quality.

Creative, original, interesting Patrick. A "lady or the tiger" ending, too. Excellent!

very well written, an almost psychological feel to it and i like how you incorporated it into the story where Angel was making a decision to join W&H. I think you should leave it as a single story. It's really effective as a short piece reflecting on Angel's troubles. You brought everything needed to describe Angel and using a card game as an option was a very good idea. :-) Halina x

Very dark and atmospheric. I liked the analogy of the card game and life. I especially liked 'the coin's already been flipped.' nice way to end it.