This chapter really made me laugh.The people in my house *who think DBZ is stupid, can't even believe i am related to them* thought i was going insane. Keep up the good work.

I really like this chapter. Its about time someone wrote about Goten and Trunks as little kids. The first chapter really made me want to read more. Can't wait
Also you might want to check your spelling. You had a couple of typos.

O keep going!

i am really glad that someone decided to make a story about trunks and gotens friendship. they seem so close to me. Any way i am really looking foreward to the rest of the story
chapter on was a little short but i don't blame someone who doesn't want to get blown away by a hurricane
merri

This is a good story, Diamond-wind. I hope that you do not want to get hit by Hurricane Isabel, because then you would not be able to continue this fantastic story.