that was a really good fic

i liked it although it was a wittle short

That was great I loved it you should write more k!

It wasnt bad but it was Gender is one of my fave about two thousand more words and i would probally love it.

are you gay? anyway, it's too mushy mushy googoo.

I'll make it short: I love it,...continue...you know you want to...

Watchin a little to much rasslin there but overall a fine story and an inspiration to me to eventualy write a BG story nice job.

Now write a Dice/Elena story cause you know those two are survivors!

dennisud

AWW! HOW SWEET!

I love your motto at the end!

aw. that was sweet. make a sequel!

Hey that was a really sweet story there kid looks just like i taught it would a girl with Yuji's hair and Marlene's eyes. And I love what you named her man you sure are good at filling in the gaps hope to see some more!

I liked it, not to soppy. You should try writing a longer one, mabey 2 or 3 chapters?

Nice work here. I'm happy to see more Blue Gender fics like this out. Wrote more Blue Gender fics if possible.

great fic i hope you write more Yugi/Marelene fics

Really good story.