Keep going.

This is a really good interesting story. Why did you stop? Please continue.

aww darn cliffhanging!

PLEASE hurry with the next chapter:) I can't wait to find out what happens next

Nice chapter.. I do hope you will continue the story. :)

Ehm.. nice setting of the fic.

love it. this is so good. u need to write more.

Wow~ Great story. This fanfic could turn out really nicely. Remember to update soon! ^_^

~Raine

this is really gd its got great potentail keep it up. if u need ideas contact me. i may be able to help.

cool. keep going.

I've read that book, its pretty good. But the Slayer's name wasn't Elizabeth it was Eleanor. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, just saying some advice, but if u want to keep it that way fine by me. Keep writing!