Wow... that was really good... kinda freakily dramatic, but awesome. It makes it hard to review though, because you are so hollowed out by the end. Awesome job.

I really was hoping he would realize...at the end...but he didn't. It's a shame. I don't know why, but I really like Peter. It really is nice seeing a story all about him. Even if I really was hoping for a happier ending, this was still very good.

C-chan

Oh...Peter needs a hug. He needs more self-esteem, that's it! I'm a strong believer he will realise he's done wrong, though it'll probably be when he dies. The part of Remus's suicidal attempt practically killed me. You really are the Queen of Remus Torture. Wow. Really good.

I...I...Wow! That was a Very

powerful story! I mean I could feel every emotion! This was very well written and I hope u wright more stories soon!

That has to be one of the best story I have ever read on ! I hope u keep wrighting cuz u have quite a talent! WOW!

*Padfoot4ever*

Wow! is there anything more to say. WoW

This is amazing. I wanted to stop reeading but I coulden't this is realy very good.

Wow. Really amazing.

wow, that story really tells you something about peter doesn't it? it really made me think, if wanting to live is such a good thing, look what it did to peter. I really want to know where this irrational fear of death he has came from, is it just some weird thing or did some thing happen to him. Anyway as usual your immense writing talent leaves me astounded. This story is a raw and powerful story of a person consumed by greed and selfishness, amazing and disturbing, very powerful. You truly have a gift for writing, i hope you never stop writing because whatever you write i'll read, cuz' it's sooooo good!

Beautifully written.

you know... ::weeeping:: i..i...i hated peter, i hated him, like everyone else, and i still do, but deep down, some pity, remorse, something...god! why cant i ever think up anything! i'm such an idiot...you're so...amazing...the beat i can do is a really funny challenge fic...but someone else set the stupid parameters! AARRGGHHH!

Wow.

Wow...that end REALLY freaked me out. Nothing wrong with that. I always pictured Peter as...well...pretty darn sane. But this works too. There aren't enough stories that have the guts to make Peter a human being. Good job.

beams You're my hero! That was absolutely *amazing*. You do such a wonderful job getting inside a character's head and your portrayal of *everyone* is so beautifully done. Plus, your always wonderful writing style and way with words combined to make this story especially haunting. All I can say is, beautiful job, and your work always stays with me long after I'm done reading.

This is easily the *best* MWPP fic I've ever read. The in-depth character portrayals were totally *believable*. There were a few technical errors but I was just so blown away by the story and characterization, it's forgivable. This could have been yet another weepy Lupin fic, but telling it from Peter's POV had the nice effect of not making it unbearingly angsty and depressing. And you gave an interesting and totally original explanation for Peter's motivations. Bravo! I think I'm going to put this on my favorite's list. Outstanding - I just can't say enough good things about this story!

*blinks* This is definately going on my favorites list. You really portrayed everyone right on the spot... though I'm a bit worried for Lupin's sanity. _

This was beautiful. It made me cry, it was just so . . . sad! And I already respected your work from the days when I read Animorphs, but I was not expecting this! And (mostly because I'd only focused on the side presented to me) I'd never thought of him as anything other than a little rat who did this for his own sake (which I still believe him to be), but you explore more of that, and why, and who he is. As I said, beautiful. If you don't mind, I have to go and eat a pint of Ben and Jerry's now . . . :) "In the end, I will be the one laughing. The one laughing at you all..." great quote . . .