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Banter
2003-12-05 . chapter 7
Thanks for the shoutout...I think...so you mean that if I review for this chapter that me and you could have incredibly long-winded conversations in nothing but Reviews and Story Replies?...Neat!
ChocoDonut5000
2003-11-30 . chapter 6
That was a nice way to end. I can't believe his parents didn't care that *he* (Piotr) was alive still. I understand they're upset over Illyana's death, but that's no reason not to be grateful for their son. Nice story. I really liked the Piotr/Kurt friendship. Don't see much of those.
ChocoDonut5000
2003-11-30 . chapter 5
Oh, poor Piotr! I think you're spelling it Poitr sometimes instead of Piotr, might want to change that. I really liked the dialogue in this chapter, keep it up!
ChocoDonut5000
2003-11-30 . chapter 4
"You might rust." Hehe. I always wondered if that was possible. Then he would really be like the Tin Man. :) I liked the part with the picture of Amanda. Kurt's parents seem so nice. I like how you describe them.
ChocoDonut5000
2003-11-30 . chapter 3
Illyana *died*? Oh man, that's harsh. Now for the next 2 chapters...
ChocoDonut5000
2003-11-30 . chapter 2
Whoa, something *really* special must be in that pack. I knew Kurt drank beer, but it still seems weird. Oh well. :)
ChocoDonut5000
2003-11-30 . chapter 1
Yuck, poor Kurt! I'm glad Piotr is going home. Bad Magneto.
bant
2003-11-30 . chapter 7
Bwahahaha! Thats the strange part, i dont have any money! You will, so i guess we will just keep stealing each others money until we both have some? Maybe not!
ZANNE
2003-10-17 . chapter 6
WOW! Great story! I forgot to read it before and just happened to look on a favorites list and there it was! Very sad though. Keep up the good work! I updated "The Book of X" too. Check it out!
Banter
2003-10-04 . chapter 6
*cries* This is so happy an ending...but I am still sad. Poor Colossus...poor POOR Piotr. Oh well. X-Men will treat him good. Like...nevermind. Cute story though. A little scary...a little odd...but cute!
Banter
2003-10-04 . chapter 5
o_O...you know that if I found out that my mutant enemy from the opposite team was housing a dead child in a sack in my bedroom...I'd throw his ** out SO freaking fast...

Piotr: :O I killed her
Me:...
*Piotr finds himself outside the house with the sack on his head and the dead girl in his lap*
Piotr: o.o;

This chapter was just scary. Yeah...nightmares...yeah
Banter
2003-10-04 . chapter 4
Holy fookin' shi-at. Colossus is my age in this thing! We could date! Sweet jumpin Jeebus! Not to offend or anything. I'm just expanding my dating pool ^_^;;. I liked the end mention of Mystique. I love that woman. But it's true...she wouldn't fit in with the Wagners...

Mrs. Wagner: More tea, Raven? :D
Mystique: ...~.~

Kurt's so cute with his girlfriend! Aw...Kurt's family makes me all jealous. Why couldn't I have been thrown into a river as a child?
Snitter in Rivendell
2003-10-01 . chapter 6
ack! its over! so cute! i love how you make the focus of this story be about family...i noticed eariler you said that peter never made his bed when he worked with magneto (shame on him!) and then when he is with his paretns, he just leaves...so true! seeing that magneto has changed him a bit, it would be more like a member of the acolytes just to leave a troubling situation...and peter is in the mansion! yes! man, love the ending! good ol' peter

snitter
Snitter in Rivendell
2003-10-01 . chapter 5
awe! poor peter! he needs a serious hug *goes to hug him, sees dead girl*...um, maybe later
anyways, this was a wonderful chapter, loved the nightmare...it was so freaky...not overdone, just perfect...love how kurt tries to be comforting, because that is so much like him...wonderful what his folks are going to think that the big russian fella has a dead girl in his pack...ack! scary stuff!

snitter
Snitter in Rivendell
2003-09-30 . chapter 4
awe! love this family! definately need more fics about kurt going home! yeah! anyways, loved kurt hanging by the rafter beams, it was just so cute...ack! so many things i liked about this chapter i don't know where to begin! love peter thinking about how mystique would differ in this situation, that she is not very motherly...love how kurt blushes at his mum's mistaking amanda for kitty, and how his blush is not noticable...arg! cutest chapter ever!

snitter
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