Very nice. *huggles odd pairings* This is as darkly delicious as I could hope for from such a pairing, incredibly sensual however implicit and twisted the actual act may be, not to mention full of wonderful characterizations. The mood is as refined and slinky and vaguely sleazy as Malfoy, and the perfect prefect angsting over his life of unethical "fringe benefits" and personal degredation and whatnot could hardly be more in character. Thank you for this.

Wow...

I like how you took a fairly unusual pairing and made it seem completely plausible. You definitely stayed true to canon. I also like how you kept Percy in character, as well as his arrogance in the beginning of the story. You really helped me to gain some insight into Percy's character, as well as his thought processes. Thanks for writing a great fanfic!

~Sarah

It really is interesting to see stories about Percy. I wonder mightily about what JK has in mind with him.
Fascinating story and a sad one at that. Minor spelling errors but on the whole very nice.