I'd have to say it's Haku...

I like it! Nice job ^.^

Kinda sounds like Naruto, or maybe Gaara, but ever since the episode with Sasuke were he fights Naruto and he starts to look like a demon and since I saw a picture on the internet of it fully, it could be Sasuke. Now where's my cookie?

Its Gaara, I figured it out when it said demon or human. I liked it make more like this and make the people think...no matter how much it hurts! ;P

o i liked it ^.^
*reads your other stories*

I can't say who this is about, exactly. A lot of people in Naruto have demons inside them. Not actual demons for most, but maybe skeletons in the closet is a better term for what I'm saying. Loved it, by the way. . . . I don't know, I think you are a better writer than people give you credit for. Anyways, have a great life. Bye!

hi sweety! Its me! alayna! i read your first poem that you put up! i like it! but thats not what im gonna talk about! i want to ask you! whats with all those damn yaoi pairings! i mean come on! i counted to 50 something before giving up! thats a hell of alota yaoi! i just hope lila and i can bring you back to the reality that is our school! ok! ill stop using exlimation points... NOW. ok. thats all i had to say. see ya tomorow.

loved the poem, if i could remember how to cry i would have
i have 2 in mind. both are jonnins either kakashi
or the female...kurenai i think. can never spell it right. but it souns like either of them.

That was awesome.. really deep.. It's about Gaara, right? I was picturing Gaara just about the entire time I read this thing.

KICK **! i love that one! but assylum is still my fav. ^_^

i know who it is!
IT's MAITO GAI ! YAY CLAP FOR ME

definitely gaara

It must be about Gaara. Definitely. Very good, by the way. You know, the way the verses are put, it could be a song.

Super Monkey Chibi Girl:"IT'S ABOUT NARUTO!
NOW GIVE ME A COOKIE"
Keiriku Jisatsusha Abunai:"..."
Super Monkey Chibi Girl:You don't have no cookies...
Arg"
*runs away but hits into a tree*
(that was a good poem)

it's gotta be sasuke... even though it describes Naruto pretty well, too. The part of running away from fear sounds much like sasuke in his battle with Orach, and the part about being nothing but mere shadows of the past is also very sasuke-ish... as well as naruto-ish. I don't think it could be zabusa because the series never really developed him as a static character until the very end and that was too late for him to be the central man of this poem. And it couldn't be Haku... i mean, the boy's too damn happy about being Zabusa's tool and never thought about being "lost." Gaara? I don't know, I haven't watched enough eppies to fully analyze the guy.