This is such an interesting story and I wish you would've continued it. I would've love to see if Zack actually found Cloud or not and where Cloud has been. Zack's interactions with everyone was great as well, and it would've been interesting to see how he would've liked everyone else.

I think this story is great so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Its been like 4 years since u update this story, I hope to see more of it, Cya.

I don't think you updated this in a while... It's soo damn good though! v.v

Please, keep writing. It's a great story.

Hi! If you're still out there somewhere, please update this story! I really do love this kind of fic. =]

I really like it!*_* So, please continue!!

aww yay i finally had time to read this story, its pretty damn awsome ^^ i only hope that vincent is gonna be in this :( he wasnt mentioned!!no unless thats were cloud secretly is ;) ha heh anywho cant wait for an update ^^

Well, Im really enjoying this so far!

I understand that updates may take a long time, but it's nice to see someone 'close' to Cloud. Someone who understands his silences.

In the game he often irked me simply because - in an effort to let the gamer decide his personality - Cloud displayed none of his own... Advent Children was much better, but he still came accross as reserved and a little unaware that his comrades were more than that... :D

I hope you update again soon!

It looks so good '_' And hasn't been updated >_> ^_^ So I guess it doesn't matter, but I thought I'd let you know anyway :p Just in case I'm the random reviewer that got back into writing again. That and because I just like to talk =]

oh please continue!
I am enjoying and am annoyed at the lack of chapters!!

intrestin story! heh I would have told zack to see vincent cuz he knows everything! XD where the heck is cloud though?!

This is a very interesting story, but I notice you haven't updated in a long time and wondered if you're going to finish it any time soon? I'd love to hear how Zack meets up with each of the Avalanche members, especially Vincent! And I want to learn how Cloud reacts to him when he finds him at last. And where in the heck is Cloud hiding that nobody could find him? Do we get answers? Or silence? I'm hoping answers, and SOON! So put pen to paper or fingers to keyboard and GET WRITING!! Kay? Don't disappoint! You got a lot of reviews, which means there's others who think like I do.

AW!!YOU SHOULD REALLY CONTINUE WRITING THIS! IT IS SO GOOD! SERIOUSLY! PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP?! IT ROCKS! I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M LIKE DYING OVER HERE!

Aww! *pouts* Now, that isn't fair! *cries* IT ENDED! *wails in dispair* Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update soon?? *poppy eyes*