Eu adorei a fic, a primeira vez que eu li foi no Weiss Kreuz Secret Paradise, quero dizer que vocês escreveram muito bem. Só fiquei meio perdida com a parte de no passado só terem passado duas horas, o que me fez entender que foi apenas um sonho que os dois tiveram para mostrar como poderia ser o futuro e não deixar que o futuro deles ficasse assim, não sei se foi isso, outra coisa que eu não entendi é como o aya poderia abraçar o Yohji do passado na noite em que eles dormiram juntos se ele tinha um braço quebrado? Mas em todo caso eu achei a fic perfeita, bjos

UAU!
Me comovi, me zanguei com os personagens, fiquei com pena, fiquei fascinado pelas situações, enfim. Fantástica essa fic. A pacividade do Aya me incomodou um pouco no início, mas depois deu para sacara que foi o trauma, mesmo sem a explicação de vcs no final. Muito boa mesmo.

I realize this fanfic was written in Portuguese, so there is a good chance you can't read or understand this review, but I am compelled to leave it regardless, because I just spent the better part of the day translating and reading your wonderful story. I used babelfish (babelfish.altavista.com) to translate the pages from Portuguese to English, and from their poor translation I was able to figure out most of the story. I would absolutely love it if you were willing to translate the story into English, and I would be happy to help smooth out the grammar for you if you did, but I realize that would be a major project. Still, if you are ever interested in trying it, contact me at kasra_c@yahoo.com.
As for the story itself - I cannot express how much I loved it. There is very little Gluhen-based fanfiction, and I discovered your story while searching for stories to put into my Gluhen fanfiction archive. There's even less fanfiction about Kyou (to the point that I am running a fanfiction contest just for Kyou fanfiction), and I was thrilled to find him not only as a character in this story, but having a vital role in the story. Unfortunately he ended up on the bad end of things - I really did feel for him in your story, even if he was a bit of a bastard to Ken and Omi (which is my favorite pairing).
I loved the variety you put into your pairings, and how cleverly you prevented any of the doubles of Omi and Yohji from ever seeing each other. This is also the first time I have ever seen the pairing OmixSena written, though I promise you it will not be the last, since I am working on a fanfiction with the same pairing (I am still looking for a KyouxOmi fanfic, though!) I especially liked the way you reasoned through all of the changes in Weiss over time, and how things had degraded to the point where everything had gone to in the future. I really felt for Sena and Kyou, caught up in the aftermath of a disaster from years earlier. The ending gave me hope, however - and perhaps Kyou can find some comfort in Sena when it comes time for them to join Weiss.
Overall, this was an excellent fanfiction, and I greatly enjoyed reading it. I hope you continue to write Weiss Kreuz Gluhen in the future.