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| RinandSess 2008-06-19 ch 14, | abuseI love the story, please update soon!! |
| gundamzgt36 2008-06-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseis Conan turning back to Shinichi and is he going to be back to is famly or stay away from them? |
| Jess.E.D. 2008-04-04 ch 14, | abusedamn what a cliffhanger! REALLY hope you update soon lol, really wanna find out what happens next. Be waiting for the next chappie update soon yea? =) ja ne |
| kaori-chan 2008-04-01 ch 13, anon. | abuseso did you know that jodie-sensei and akai-kun are part of the FBI and they are the good guys? |
| YinYangDarkLight 2008-02-29 ch 14, | abuseWell, I started out with "I'm Already There" and I must say I'm quite happy that you've continued with the plot. Sometimes I have to stop reading and run a lap around the apartment before jumping back in the chair and eagerly reading more. The intense story-telling just makes me a bundle of engery and I can't help it... ...or maybe it was all that caffine... Either way, I love your righting and I hope you continue soon. Keep writing! -Yinnie |
| Amidala Granger 2008-01-27 ch 14, | abuseI've read your story, and it's great!! I love it! I've cried a lot with it, please, keep writing, update it soon!!*_* |
| mynewname 2008-01-26 ch 14, | abuseAH!! What an evil place to stop! This story is awesome I hope you finish it one day... |
| Takagouzawa Hikari-san 2008-01-21 ch 14, | abuseMygod so much happened, it just all exploded in my face. I'm really blown away by your work, it's so good! I read the prequels to this, and it's sort of amazing that you can cram so much stuff happening in one day! I love this! Awesome story! Please try to update soon! |
| tantei lena-haruno 2007-12-25 ch 14, | abuseCof... cof... i am spanish... i don´t understand the english... but i do my best... xD (the transator is very very miraculous xD xD) I read the translation of the part 8... (The translation of Meicross... xD I can´t transaltion your fic... T.T It´s very difficult...) I love your fic... You are a best writer... YOU ARE BRILLIANT, INCREDIBLE! In spain, there is a page. This name is: MALOS FICS Y SUS AUTORES. They say that you are very good writing!! CONGRATULATIONS! ^.^ you are fantastic!! (o my good... my english is very bad... T.T DON´T LAUGHT OF ME!!)xDxD Agh! Write in english is very difficult agh! I hope you understand my effort! xD I wanted to send you this message!! ^^ Wi!! xD A kiss for you! By: tantei lena haruno |
| anaime7 2007-11-28 ch 14, | abusei wonder if u r ever going to update after looking at the last update date...PLZ UPDATE!need a happy ending! |
| AntiSora 2007-11-06 ch 14, | abuseWell, I've got to say, for a whole series" spawned from a 4am fic, this is pretty intense! Your first one was great, the second one rocked, and this one is just plain AWESOME. I am in awe of you incredible ability. I hereby add you to the list of "writing gods and goddesses" |
| Karia Ithilai 2007-11-05 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story. Just simply, WOW. The characterization and the flow are superb, and the level of emotion in the story had me reeling in sensory overload. This is WAY too good to discontinue, so please update as soon as you can! I loved your description of Conan/Shinichi in desperate-mode. The two prequels ('Already There' and 'Stronger than I Am') set a great background, and the Ran X Shinichi was very well-portrayed without being fake or overly-fluffy. Angst that is as good as this is really rare. REALLY, REALLY RARE. The scientific explanation of the apotoxin, as well as how the cure is supposed to work, are all very well thought out. It gives the whole story a new level of reality and depth. I can tell that you actually took the time to think this out (either that, or you're some kind of genius on par with Haibara and Co). All in all, there's not a lot that I can nitpick at. Oh - Conan's clothes. If he's about to change from a twelve-year-old to a twenty-two-year-old, wouldn't he need to change into larger clothes? Dunno, that was the only thing that bugged me. Overall, great job. Please update soon! |
| Notoriousblue 2007-11-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseI can't wait for another update! You did an amazing job writing this! I couldn't stop reading! Good work! |
| miayuki 2007-10-26 ch 14, anon. | abuselove this story pls update and continue it !! =D |
| Taigrin Dido 2007-10-21 ch 14, | abuseOH MY GOSH! This fic is completely amazing! I dont like read fics in English because its difficult to me but this one... wow! I was reading the translation in Spanish but I couldnt wait! :) I know you're busy with college and all that stuff (good luck!) but I'll be waiting impatiently for more chaps! *gives her a cookie* |