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| Paige2196 2007-08-29 ch 6,  | abuseMay I join that team of people working on the series? The stories I have written so far is My Evil Parents and Love or Lust. I know, only 1 chapter not many reviews... But please can I join? By the way, great story. I like it. |
| mychemicalromancefreak29 2006-06-08 ch 6, | abuseHope u write more soon! I like the boys as the witches. These series are really good. I can't wait to read more. Your a good writer. |
| Matt91 2005-08-02 ch 6, | abuseWow, that was a great chapter! I loved it! Great job you guys! You're using the Charmed sisters very well. I like it a lot! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!! |
| Matt91 2005-08-02 ch 5, | abuseThis was a great chapter! Great job, Cathie! I have no idea why I didn't realize that this story hadn't been updated! Sorry it took so long for my review! Can't wait to read chapter 6! |
| pam halliwell 2005-06-18 ch 6, | abuseThis is such a cool twist on the Charmed story. I love original stories and there isn't another fab fiction quite like this one. I can't wait to continue reading now that Phoebe has entered the picture. I was waiting for her to come in. Keep it up :) |
| Marcus S. Lazarus 2004-11-02 ch 6, | abuseYou have a VERY interesting idea going on here, I'll give you that. Your grammar and formatting could be better, but the plot itself is very well set out, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things go for Phoebe. So, is she a Belthazoar style demon, or something else? Anyway, update soon! |
| Janelle 2004-09-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseI like the story. Please write more |
| Pic-a-boo-I-C-U 2004-06-21 ch 6, | abuseThank you but write for you too I enjoyed it very much but just out of curoisity why werent thery Cole Leo and Andy Halliwell and Piper Wyatt Prue Truedu and Phoebe Turner anyway i like it please continue soon |
| sandra 2004-05-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis story has potential but you need to spend more time developing the brothers’ feelings both to each other and to the magic they are now in possession of. The chemistry between them is implied implicitly by you [though I wonder if that’s intentional] and needs to be expanded upon. Prue in the cannon though angry at her youngest sister still wants to protect her. Her anger and feelings are resolved... this does not happen with your fic. It had potential and an interesting concept so with bit more detail and character development it will be very good. |
| Charmed-Snow 2004-04-14 ch 6, | abuseVery interesting. I love to see C/P affair in this story. |
| princesscatie21 2004-04-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseTHIS IS GREAT! lol, write more soon! |
| Blue eyes6 2004-03-06 ch 5, | abuseTHnaks for letting me help you finish the chpt. It was fun writing waiting for someone else |
| Da Poetic One 2004-01-26 ch 4, | abuseThat was a funny chapter. Cole is such a ** sometimes. I liked the action in it, also. Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing. You know the deal. |
| Blue eyes6 2004-01-25 ch 4, | abuseI love this story. It's very orginal using the guys as the main characters. I love how you use the actual Charmed Ones in the parts that belong to the guys. Can't wait for the next chpt. |
| damien455 2004-01-24 ch 4, | abusegood story...cant wait for more |