This is excellent! I am looking forward to reading the second chapter. I am glad it is up.

WOW! I'd never thought about how his family felt when he died! That was soooo...something...different when he was about to say Mr. Smith's name and the judge cut him off. I'm like "Oh, man!" I also apprecitated that you had him say he's not an angel. The PAXTV page calls him one and for some reason it maked me sooo mad! Anyway, great first half, I'm gonna go read part 2. _