I can't get at the unedited version, something about not being able to view a protected entry or something...? I'd really like to be able to see that, and get some more of this awesome fic, if you wouldn't mind...?

~J

I really hope you continue this. It was the best Loki/Heimdall story I have ever read *prefers the uncut version though* ~_^ I was in a ** mood and this fic made my day ^^ thanks, and please write more

~Shana

So much cute drama! I read the unedited version of this, I loved it!

OMGZZLES! I LOVE IT! You write so well. I even read the un-cut version. *wink* I giggled and blushed SO MUCH. You rock! I'd love to see another story from you on this pairing! Much love.

You are my god...or um, goddess in this case.
I envy your ability to twist words the way you wish very much. It was wonderfully written, and yes, I went to the uncut version of MockUp Thief and spent probably five minutes gaping at the screen at the sheer eliteness of it. Everything was nicely worded, and I certainly do hope this could be continued.

Sincerely,
Pastel

That was excellent. Your ability to wield words is magnificent. I could read your writing for hours and not grow bored. I read the uncut version, which was perfect. A particularly hard pairing that you pulled of masterfully and with remeniscence to the cannon versions. I truly enjoyed that fic and hope for more in the future. Masterfully done. :)

wow, this was great! this should be T rated though. but i still loved it YAY heimXloki! LOVE!

CONTINUE!

continue it!!
i luv this fic!

heh heh, i loved the story! great writing and great plot and great characterization. twas great

AH! That was so great! The best L/H fic I've ever read. Awesome, awesome.

This fic is simply marvelous!! One of the best L/H MLR fics I've ever read. I even went so far as to go to read the unedited version (Which I usually don't do because I'm lazy, lazy enough to not even sign in XD) The feelings touched me and I almost felt as if I were in the fic, rather then reading it. It was absolutely perfect.

Wow... I also read the uncensored version... I must say that you write really, really well.^^ I hope that you write more soon.^^

ah! This is wonderful! I adore it!

~*favorite*~

I love it! Really! Please, write more fanfics, yours are so lovely!