OMG i love that that was so kawaii i dont know how many times i can say i love it , it has short chapters but very detailed

*clicked fav, button*

cute story alittle too much blood though. still the plot was great and in the beggining you stayed right on topic. if i was an english teacher i would give this an A and my english teacher read this and said she would give an A. but i thought it was better than an A. we should talk some time

that was the sweetst story i don't know why but it sounded like u were there fist handly .like u were the sister or the angel or somthing that made this story or real .ok i think you should become a writer what ever your furture job was (not trying to sound to mean here so forgive me and when i say)don't take what u really wanted to do and just become a writer for me and your friends that like how you make this storys sound so real and life like love amanda

girl in ch 12 u can't cry u made the story u thought of it n well i should be the 1 crying .oh i know i'm going off topic but me n jes just might go 2the MOVIES n i'm am like so ready becaues all we are going to do is well u should know
p.s u go girl love amanda -

Cool...kinda the expected ending, but it still feels good, yeah...revenge! Anyway, excellent story! It's kinda late now...but I'l try take a look at your other stuff now...sorry if i fall asleep...just so damn late. If I do, I'll check tomorrow. Anyway, here goes!

heyhey! wow. thys was gr8. i realy lyked it. lol very deep. thx 4 alwayz keepin me posted. ur awesome

*sniff*
so, sad...
but so good...
it's a work of art.
i salute u!

...so she does die then...I feel bad for Sesshomaru. Perhaps that explains his utter hatred for people...so the one question remains: how does he accomplish his revenge? Nice addition! Although sad, like you said, it was bound to happen. Post soon! I'll be waiting!

heyhey! depressin and yet another amazing fanfic! u r truly an awesome writer! keep it up! hope to see all of you 4 Christmas if i come down _

heyhey! thys is realy good. lol realy involved _ ive read all ur fanficz n thys n An Evening w. the Inuyasha Crew r my favz. let me kno wen u add another chapter. keep it up TK

oh no! I hope nothing bad happens to Lady Crynda
T-T! Go Sesshoumaru! save your mother!
Can't wait for another chapter!

don't stop writing! it is very very good. yes yes

OOh...grr...evil cliffhanger there! That one leaves us on a cliffside as high as the Grand Canyon...sucks to be us! Anyway, although a VERY short chapter...it definitely focuses the plot into something quite sinister...life or death...good stuff. And please, don't let us hang long! Post again soon!

girl i love you stuff and i envy you to much that i wish i could write like you but i have a empty

head so i really can't make good story's like you can you should help me out . OK THANKS

LOVE YOU GIRL AMANDA

Although a short addition, it's still rolling along! I wish your chapters would be longer...but hey, your story. Anyhow, interesting stuff...just wondering though...what will become of his mother? Probably the stupidest question...but still, I can't help but feel that this is where the story is going. Will she live or die? Anyhow, keep going!