Nice story! Thanks for sharing. Linda

Terrific story! I like it when everyone stays true to their character, and Lindemann, John and Jack Thornwater were very real to me as well. The "Stepdad" line helped.

Very good, excellent plotline and you kept the story moving forward at a fast clip.

Nice story. I enjoyed it.

I loved that! My favorite lines were-John: I didn't know your mom could shoot.

Phillip: Neither did I.