i liked it! i think it was so moony!

though i feel like you just left it hanging,

Very good story.

“But you don’t care if I bite you?” “No, of course not.”
O.O
That must have shocked the other werewolf. He must have been thinking, "Who is this crazy wizard?"
I feel that this personifies how I imagine Remus to be when he's not moping around, or how he would be if James/Lily/Sirius lived. But nonetheless, the carefree attitude seems to be just what the doctor ordered for the other werewolf. That was a bit of a strange place to end the chapter, but I think I understand. I do that a lot with my stories, I can't really find a place to end it, so I just end it. It frustrates both myself and my friends/reviewers though. But anyway, great job. It is a rather original concept and I'd love to see this fic continued.

very good, I approve.

Hey, it's Jas from the UU group here. I saw your post with your story so I decided to check it out. Sorry I didn't read that specific one, but I will later. Now, back to the story. I loved it! It was great. A little short but that's fine. Perhaps you could write a bit more? I definately think you should, and if you do, I will read it for sure. Good work!

*stomps on denzians of ff.net* WHY aren't there more reviews for this?! It's kind of sweet and rather funny. Remus's dialogue was fantastic, he was very funny. *pets other guy* Cute, grumpy werewolf... Anyway, great fic!

hmm... odd place to end the chapter.
quite a nice dialogue you written but remus seems to be a bit too conversational, perhaps? em... carry on regardless...