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Sabishii Kage Tenshi
2008-06-10
ch 17,
abuseWell for once it's Yugi and not Yami who wants to find out his past.. =)
Bored2Deth
2008-02-14
ch 53,
abusei have a thirteenth grave card somewhere...its sort of creepy looking.anyway i love this story, even though its taken me three days to get this far
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY
2008-02-12
ch 11,
abusethis is awesome
Bored2Deth
2008-02-11
ch 18,
abusewow...seto is acually nice.usually in stories like this he's mean and selfish.nice switch
sliders245
2007-11-05
ch 61,
abuseI love it and sequel??
ktty
2007-04-18
ch 61, anon.
abuseit was really good! it tok 3 day to read the dang thing but wow! its been a year sence i last got this cuat up in a fanfic!
vaoni
2006-07-23
ch 2,
abuse*cries* that was so good
Riley Masters
2006-07-18
ch 61,
abuseOh. My. God. That was. THE. Greatest Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfic I have EVER read. And believe you me, I've read a LOT of them. I started reading at about... oh around 2:00 PM. It's midnight. I read the WHOLE THING. AND LOVED IT!!

In the beginning, I was a little skeptal, I mean with Yugi being all weak and scared. But he really grew up.

I knew two kids, older sister and younger brother, whose parents faught. A lot, like Yugi's parents in PPF. They were so afraid that they would call me at 3 in the morning to have my mom pick them up. They were afraid of getting hit. Yugi's emotions matched theirs, so I thank you for being so accruate. And also having Yami banish them to the Shadow Realm.

The details you used were VERY good. I could picture the final battle for Gaia in my mind. That takes talent. Which you have. Congrates.

My only regret is that you put Yugi, Yami and their friends in so much danger and pain. At first, it bothered me, but in the end, I think it worked out well.

Considering this is a REALLY long review, I will leave you in peace and with the knowledge that you have made this crazy, insane bookworm/cosplayer/anime psychopath a REALLY happy crazy, insane bookworm/cosplayer/anime psychopath!

Sincerly yours,
Karu-kun

PS: It seemed like you left room for a SEQUAL. Please give us, your loyal fans, one. That would be oh-so-cool!
Sensibly Insane
2006-06-27
ch 61,
abuseThat was awesome. I absolutely loved the plot, and the way it was written, and... everything! I can't even think of
any critisimsm... It was just... Wow!
Angel Spirit
2006-05-30
ch 32,
abuseAh...all the wonderful angst, I'm sitting here just eatting it up and completely enjoying myself! I love the brotherly teasing that you've got going on between Seto and Jou and it was really sweet of how concerned Seto was when he Jou and Yugi's grandfather were stuck in the prison cell back there. This plot line keeps on thickening with each chapter and I'm loving it! I wanted to just give Yugi a big hug in this chapter... Pegasus was a surprise for me though, I wasn't expecting him but I like how creative you are with each different Shadow Game that Yami uses. You've definitely got a huge imagination! And now, I shall continue reading...*clicks next chapter*
Angel Spirit
2006-05-26
ch 17,
abuse*Pouts* If I keep going on like this I'll be up all night reading this, and from what I see I've definitely still have quite a few chapters to go! ;p So I think I need to stop reading now and pick up on it later since this seems like a good stopping point and I'm not leaving myself off with a cliffhanger! ;p Why do I sense a sudden impending doom coming up? If I remember correctly, something bad happens within the next couple of chapters or so (and makes me rather tempted to continue reading on)-but this 'break' was cute. ^-~ I love it when Jou annoys Seto, it's amusing to no end. Poor Jou getting beaten up by Anzu and her book ;p I'll say it again that I definitely like her more in this fic then I have in many other fics I've read and the series even, you do a beautiful job of working out character personalities for this, and I'm totally enjoying it...THIS time I'll finish reading the whole fic because I think I lost track of it last time-but I'm so glad that I found it again! ^-~v *adds to favorites once more*
Angel Spirit
2006-05-26
ch 10,
abuseAw...I think I'm practically melting into a big pile of mush right now...^-~ *tries to pick herself up off the floor to reach the keyboard* Gyah, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat-I was all sitting here going 'please don't let Yugi's parents come home, please don't let Yugi's parents come home.' I adore how you've got Seto's character in this-you've brought out more of his protective older brother side and I always liked that in his character...Mokuba's acting adorable-as always! You've even got me liking Anzu's character too, and normally she's not really my favorite so kudo's to you! So Yugi finally gets out of the attic, and away from home...and Yami admits to Jou that there are security camera's around so he HAS to go down and tell Seto the truth! Wonder what Seto's going to say to that...heh...and the mystery keeps unravelling...
Angel Spirit
2006-05-26
ch 3,
abuseTotal cuteness going on there between Jou and Yugi. I like how you had Jou all excited about them becoming a group of friends-very sweet! I had the feeling that Yami was going to send Ushiro's mind into the shadow realm ;p served him right! LOL...last chapter made me want to cry, this chapter's got me smiling-Jou's actually one of my favorite characters, it's nice to see him protecting Yugi. *continues reading*
Angel Spirit
2006-05-26
ch 2,
abuseAw...I feel so bad for poor Yugi...*sniffs* Makes me want to cry, really...and I love it when a fic gets to me that way. I like how you're pouring emotion into this, I can practically picture everything that's going on in this fic in my head. I swear I remember reading and reviewing this fic before and I'm glad that you decided to put it up again and continue/finish it. LOL, it's been so long since I've read this fic though that I'm going to have to read it all the way through but that's okay because if I remember it was an awesome fic and worth reading over again. ^-^v I can't wait until Yugi's parents get what's coming to them (this chapter makes ME want to hurt them!), now if I remember correctly...*trails off and goes to the next chapter*
BlackRoseTenshi
2006-03-13
ch 61, anon.
abuseI have to say...that was one of the best stories I've ever read. Great job! ^_^
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