aww that story gave me warm and fluffy feelings :) very nice. but what i dont get is all the people saying artemis crying is out of character. wtf? he cries like 3 times in the books, plus in this story he's even younger and just lost his father! give the kid a break :P

this was a nice fic, very good not silly or anything, i like it a lot.

however, when artemis is cying... i dunno i guess it's kinda out of character. it wasn't too soppy though (except for perhaps when he just breaks down)

hmm overall a well written piece

Derangedfangirl is too busy curled into a ball in the corner sobbing like a child to formulate a review. This is her computer saying WELL DONE!

This was really sweet, but I really can't imagine Arty crying... Really good.

Aw that was so cute!

Cute. Really cute. I'm glad you wrote it, whatever the reason.

I enjoyed this! You did a pretty good job of keeping the character's personalities true to the book, even when you described emotions that weren't normally portrayed. Thank you for making it not extremely sappy!

Are you going to continue this?

nice, and heart warming, it really shows their relationship, father son type, almost anyways

Loverly

~Hitokiri Takushi~

How sweet...no, Kitty, you're right...there aren't that many fics that focus on Artemis and Butler that aren't- erm- no comment. Good job!

~Rising Sun~

This was really sweet. I enjoyed it. I think it's perfect as-is.

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Very good. There are too few Artemis-Bulter fics. Blue Yeti is right- like always.

Your fellow writer,
Identity99

this is really good and sad :-( i enjoyed reading this on a sunday night WHEN MOST OF MY HOMEWORK IS DONE YIPEE oh how i hate year mine andi have to have my BCG (big injection) in 2 days help me! Ow well butler will be there for me ! :-)

*hugs the loffly Kitty Rainbow for the dedication and the ficness in the first.* I still love it. A/B is the bomb, second only to H/J.

I need to get on the net later on, not so early when you are doing your homework. And it's your birthday tomorrow! *hugfugspoff*