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Reviews For: Burning Bridges
KnowInsight 2004-05-15 . chapter 1
Aw. =)
I'd forgotten what a good guy Xavier could be, glad I read this, if for that alone.
I also really like how you protrayed Star =) very good characterization.
Good going luv.
Thanks.
Am ^_^
akheliades 2003-12-25 . chapter 1
I liked the story. It was a bit choppy in some parts, but you told quite a bit in very few words.
I liked the fact that you portrayed Shatterstar as being arrogant. It was a good touch of accuracy in the character, rather than trying to 'hero'-ize him to make a clear-cut story.
Keep up the good work; there are few Shatterstar fics out there.
~ akheliades
karrenia 2003-11-11 . chapter 1
Very nice piece and I liked the interaction betwen Shatterstar and the Professor, helping him cope with Rictor leaving after and shows what Star's inner struggle shortly after those events without being overdone on the angst. Nice job.
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