akheliades 2003-12-25 . chapter 1I liked the story. It was a bit choppy in some parts, but you told quite a bit in very few words.
I liked the fact that you portrayed Shatterstar as being arrogant. It was a good touch of accuracy in the character, rather than trying to 'hero'-ize him to make a clear-cut story.
Keep up the good work; there are few Shatterstar fics out there.
~ akheliades |