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MidnightDilemma
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Wow! What a twist! This was great! I totally didn't expect that. Great job!
Toki
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
What?! I totally didn't see that coming O_O
Perce died...*sobs*
Excellent story though. I would totally go back in if I were Borus. Even though it's freaky...
chibisakura_618
2007-03-28 . chapter 1
wah u killed percival! how could u?? *sniff*

good story though, but it needs a CONTINUATION! u cant just leave us hangin'!
Mizu no Kokoro
2005-01-21 . chapter 1
Whoo... creepy~
Go BACK Borus!~
Aries28
2004-09-28 . chapter 1
Holy cow! Just leave me hangin' why don't ya? Hee hee, this was great! ^_^ Would I go in . . .well, yeah, because if you don't keep a promise to a ghost, they haunt you forever! (cue spooky sounds) That's so sad, though, that he's dead! I think I'm gonna go cry now . . .but, honestly, you couldn't have picked a better knight to kill. Don't get me wrong, I love Percival! He's my favotite knight (yes, I like him better than Chris), and a last visit to Borus sounds like something he would do. And he would be nonchalant about it, too! *Adds to favorites list*
Kaisheen
2004-07-17 . chapter 1
ghost stories? Brr...
StickyRice
2004-05-29 . chapter 1
Wow! I wasn't expecting that! What a brilliant ending!

*sniff* Very sad, but beautiful. It's a heartrending though to think that Percival would return from death to offer such sweet advice to his dear friend.

I commend you. A very well done job, indeed!
E. Feather
2004-02-12 . chapter 1
NO!
why did u make Percy die?? *wails* this is such a touching story. love your choice of words and dialogues, Touga. well-written *claps*
i'd go back into the Drawing Room if i were Borus. i mean, Percy visited him coz he couldn't just leave him! shouldn't Borus be touched or something? anyway, great fic.
Revia
2004-02-01 . chapter 1
*cries*
Wow, I enjoyed that fic. I finished it, then went right back to the beginning and read it all again. I love all the little hints that were planted, but it makes me sad... ;-; Poor Percy!
I don't want him to die!
And of COURSE Borus has to go back in! He HAS to! He promised! >.<
Great job, though! I loved it! ^__^
~ Revia
blottyparchment
2003-10-25 . chapter 1
please continue on..i wanna know what happens next
chibi viki
2003-10-06 . chapter 1
hehehe... sounds like something Landis would enjoy...
Shiva Elf
2003-10-03 . chapter 1
You... You... I can't believe you... Oh wow. That was really bautiful. I can't believe you... AHH! @_@;;
You left us hanging at the best part... Oh man, if I could just remember my password, I'd leave a comment.
I love your story to bits. o_o;; But you... cliffhanger with no continuation! AHH!
Lena108
2003-09-29 . chapter 1
Back inside! Back inside! Back inside NOW! I love this! PERCY! No! Ahem... keep going!
Love always,
Lily
Andaliri
2003-09-28 . chapter 1
Yagh!!

That was a good story and all...but WHY DID PERCIVAL HAVE TO DIE?

Well, yeah, that was the point, I guess.

Okay. Ending this review. Not really good at the blasted things, anyway.
Le Tigre
2003-09-27 . chapter 1
Wow. That was depressing, nice job that was really atmospheric and well written and you do dialogue like a pro. I wish I could do something like that but what can I say, I like explosions.
Anyway, well done, great stuff, as ever and I'm looking forwards to the next story you write.
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