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Lilly-Anne
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
aww. That's sweet. I like it but not as much as your Arisa and Kyo fics.
PeaceLover-SpreadIt895
2008-08-01 . chapter 1
haha that was cute!
UseCorrectGrammar
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
I dislike you greatly, kyo, not kyou.
loretta537
2007-09-11 . chapter 1
this one is good as well, why dont you do them all in the same thread? are there any other pieces to this story that i missed?
SilverYouko300
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
Tee hee, cute and funny! I loved this fic.
Shiro Ryuu
2007-06-05 . chapter 1
Whee xD Aw, this is just so freaking cute, I shall go into sugar shock again. “Just to be clear about it.” *roffles very much* Additionally, “sort of melting into a swirly gooey puddle” is a very good way of describing the feeling of kissing; I must commend you for your fantastic explanatory skills. :D How silly; I love it.

*flails* Non! I’ve read them all now! (I don’t really know Evangelion or Final Fantasy or Oh My Goddess T_T) Coommee baacck too uuss...
Mistress-Alyssa
2007-03-23 . chapter 1
Cute!

-Year Of The Cat 678
AssassinedAngel
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
thats so adorable! XD cute way of... how should i put this? Having them kiss!
Hidari
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
Ahh, so cute! I can't help but feel ditzy reading any well written Yuki/Tohru fluff. So cuute!
ginny
2006-07-16 . chapter 1
I've read this before a long time ago, when you wrote it, but I never reviewed. (I think I did review the fics that take place before this though.) Anyway, I've been revisiting my Uo/Kyou and man oh man, reading this makes me want to write one.
Anyway, excellent fic like always. I love how the Uo/Kyou is more subtle and not blatantly in-your-face. The Yuki/Tohru was very cute too, even though I've never been that fond of Tohru.
Samara-chan
2006-01-26 . chapter 1
HA. HAHA. "Just to be clear about it." You sly mouse, you, Yuki! xD Man. So waffy. That was awesome!
me
2005-05-22 . chapter 1
cool fic! make more chapters soon, kay? see ya, and i also hope to see more chapters soon!
Zanisha
2005-05-16 . chapter 1
KYOTANI ^^ Love it

Pairings-wise, it's a wonderful solution. Yuki and Tohru... neither are my favorite characters, but it's a good pairing. And KyouxArisa, is of course, my favorite Furuba pairing. It works so wonderfully, not to mention the fact that it involves absolutely no Kyoru!!

It was hilariously funny, and suprisingly, I loved the fluff. Your work with this piece is something to marvel at, and it is most definitely a fave ^^

RAWQ ON
Red Baroness
2005-03-06 . chapter 1
Yay for Kyotani!

... And a very, very 'licious Yukiru. All in one. I really wan't expecting that kind of behaviour from Tohru, but her desire justified it. Heh heh XD.
Naru Kami
2004-12-05 . chapter 1
Very cute! I love this.
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