I really liked this story. You kept El and Sands right in character. I definately agree with ElvenPirate41, Johnny Depp still looks hot with no eyes. He's so cute! Anyway I'd like to see more of your stories on the Once Upon A Time in Mexico section of FanFic. Bye.

this is cool!

Beauty

says it all don't it ;)

*AUS/Evil writer of the evilist thing a writer can see...a short review*

"It was a belt, which sported an emblem of a marijuana leaf as its buckle." i love that belt. it's worth buying one and making people think you're a pothead just because he has one like it. too bad i haven't got one. :(

""I see." El replied, leaning back slightly in his chair. "Killed any good cooks lately?" "No actually." The man said, "Haven't been in the mood for that either." "Too bad."" wow, that's gotta be the ultimate low when you aren't even in the mood to kill cooks. sands is so forked up it's adorable.

"Gaping sockets stared back at the mariachi, now free from the blood, which had flowed profusely from them only days ago." he looks strangely attractive, though, with blood streaming out of his eyes. my friend did that for halloween... shades with blood, in honor of the movie. twas most excellent.

""Much better than last time." And, taking the gun from his belt, stood and left the table, heading for the back of the resturante. Life for Sands would go on, much as it always did, once upon a time in Mexico..." very nice ending. ah, nothing can daunt our favorite crazy agent!

ep41 :-)

I liked your depiction of El and Sands, very true to Cannon. Not much of a plot but it's nice they got together again one last time, I was hoping they'd do that in the movie.

OUATIM finally has it's own category! I don't know if you need to move your story yourself or if ff.net'll do it for you, but I thought I'd let you know.

-Merrie.

Yea! Another OUATIM SJ fic! Ahh, our beloved SJ. You never disappoint, do you? *should feel sorry for the cook, but some how isn't* Thanks for this story! I hope to see more from you in the future!

-Merrie

"I kind of saw Agent Sands as this guy who was, ah, a danger to the agency. Obviously some kind of menace, you know, a guy who's probably got at least one or two of three imbalances."

-Johnny Depp on his character CIA Agent SJ Sands, Once Upon a Time in Mexico

I love this! I love Sands! It's very well-written, and I especially love the last bit at the end - always has to return the balance. _ Great job

V_V ff.net is being a Bastard and not letting me log in, so let me just assure you that I love this story! :D and when I get the chance I'm adding it to my favorites, there needs to be more fics about agent Sands.

I haven't the faintest clue how a blind man could find his way into the kitchen, but other than that this is a good fic. Nice characterisations. Glad to see another 'Mexico' around.

Loved it! What is it about that sick and twisted onetime agent that makes us all love him so? Heh, well, excellent story, he was perfectly in character.

BTW, would you care to read a recommendation? If so: El Hombre que LLora las Lágrimas de Sangre (don't worry, it's written in english!)

This was an excellent writing done very professionaly. Again Excellent

Wow, this was excellent! You really got into the characters! Thanks for posting this, I hadn't seen any OUTIM fics yet. Very nice, very nice!

Bravo! You really captured both of these characters well. I can't see Sands going back to the US either, so I'm glad he decided not to go. I hope you continue this, because I'd love to see more.

Liked the dialogue! Very nice!