 Lakitalover 4/21/12 . chapter 4What a relief. I was expecting that ending to be really unhappy. Anyway, good story. Very original even if Buffy was a little out of character and you had to really play up Spike and Riley's dark sides. And I do think Spike feels more loyalty to his grandsire than that. They may be fierce rivals, but I can't imagine either would ever leave the other to die (Spike could have killed Angel when they were fighting over the cup of perpetual torment, but he didn't, supposedly for Buffy's sake, though it could have been the soul). Riley, on the other hand, I could see staking both of them. |
 Lunaria Hyperion 2/21/06 . chapter 4This was done beautifully. I enjoyed it. |
 January Rose 4/13/04 . chapter 4Your Evil! Write more. I love it |
 Queen Boadicea 8/10/02 . chapter 4This is a great story...is it finished because it ends on a somewhat enigmatic note? |
 jjulz 7/29/02 . chapter 4 that was the best! yay there happy together, thank you for writing this wonderful fanfictiion. |
 julz 7/29/02 . chapter 1 wow, thats slightly disturbing, but i llike it |
 randy 2/13/01 . chapter 4 excellent I thouroughly enjoyed this fantastic tale. kodos to you keep up the good work. |
 Shelley 2/8/01 . chapter 4 You added some Doyle! AWWW! Thank you thank you thank you! |
 Storm 2/8/01 . chapter 4 Wow, that was fabulous. A tremendous story. The emotion was really believable, the plot gripping and the characters very well done. |
 Jessica 2/7/01 . chapter 4 That was really great! Interesting and creative plot and I loved the ending. Great job! :-) |
 Canadian Chic 1/6/01 . chapter 1 Great series! Very well written! I always enjoy reading your fanfics, keep it up! |
 Tina 1/6/01 . chapter 1 wow! that story was soo kool! i really hate Riley and i liked how the story portrayed him as the jealous 'bad guy'!
cant wait to read 4/4! |
 Laura 1/5/01 . chapter 1 I really loved this, it was excellent. The plot was original and well thought out and it kept you guessing right until the end. It was also great to see Riley get his comeuppance and Buffy and Angel together at the end. Well done. |
 mika 1/3/01 . chapter 1 oh this is good. And Riley is the creep, his so jealous not to metion, dumb, pigheaded, a jerk, a bleedin wanker, a jack ass, and a fish. So what happens next? |
 Python Chick 1/3/01 . chapter 1Awesome series! Where's 4/4? I can't wait to read it! |