what happened here you made the prolouge than stopped why.

U LASY SON OF A BITCH U START A FIC THEN NEVER GER AROUND TO IT EVER AGAIN

Please update this story

Sequel! must have sequel!

please?

Hmm...nice idea but i can't picture Lucca helping him willingly...hmmm...gotta think on that one. Nice start though...

Magus finds Schala?

I regret inventing this subgenre.

Interesting start... I would recommend a little editing (for example - Their, not They're). I'd also recommend use of past tense in flashbacks like the one that makes up the majority of this scene. However, good start - I hope this one gets continued!

Cool dialogue. A little lacking in descriptions, but good over all. I hope you continue.