I was excepting this to be nice!...

The terminology transition between HS and college is mixed, but I thought this was a very lovable story. Very enjoyable.

Is this college or hs? Cause you say college, but you describe it more like a hs. Crashing colleges? Getting in trouble with the principal? Detention? Bells when classes end?

Omg great chapter i like it no i LOVE it.i was looking for a different fin from the rest of the b/v stories im glad i read this was real i give you a cookie but sorry this is internet fin you should write more b/v everything about it also the singing part just picturing vegeta singing oh how i will love great awsome fin and merry christmas haha it not even christmas oh well then happy coming christmas.

LOVE ITTT Especially when u used my favorite singer Michael333 love it

AWWWWW!

Plz make a sequel 2 this great fix!

Okay i'm just starting to read this but omg having Vegeta sing Linkin park and simple plan ( who are the best live band ever)

is just genius :D

Did u spell rapist?

As in a person who rapes someone... O.O

I loved it! Great story! P

AW! THAT WAS SO TOTALY AWESOME!

I loved this story...

And here I was thinking that he would really leave her behind...

And Yamcha really needs to learn to clean his lipstick marks better...

Is that it?

I loved and adored this story that you wrote. It was so awesome. I was wondering if I could corect your grammar for this story for you. Just e-mail me. OK!

it was good.