 Yelene-ryudream 2008-06-12 . chapter 1Beautifully done. And heartwarmingly moving.
I am so happy to have you as a sister in Chist. |
 MyLyric 2004-07-15 . chapter 1This is REALLY good! It sounds almost exactly like what you would find in the book of Psalms! It is very well written (and believe me, I know good stuff when I read it!).
But I don't get why you put it under the genre "romance". Although the entire thing tells of God's love for you, that's not romance. That's the only thing I would change: the genre. I would put it under "Poetry" or something. But otherwise; WONDERFUL JOB! |
 Suiren 2003-10-06 . chapter 1 Its so beautiful. It really made my day. I really cried when I read it. Thank you |
 Nayeli Gold 2003-10-05 . chapter 1This is REALLY good. Congratulations.
~Nayeli |
 Phoenix Flight 2003-09-30 . chapter 1 Love it! |
 taggirl 2003-09-26 . chapter 1Wonderful job! That was beautiful. I loved how you set God and his love for you on center stage rather than place your own emotions in the spotlight.
After all, without his love for us we would have no love for him, and probably for no one else either; for we are creatures of limited being, and we can only mimic that which we see. If we were not loved then we could not love. In example, how could one make an apple pie if they did not know the recipe? |