very nice story. there just isn't enough senor senior juinor and kim stories. I liked it very much.

Scary

Um...This is copying a book. that's not really an interesting plot. Find your own ideas please. U probably have a lot of em, so sorry.

*stares* weird..is that based on mirette on the high wire? it sounds like that...*meeps*
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This is great! Please continue! I'm adding this to my favorites! WE!

You got that from a book but you changed the names. Other then that it is pretty good but please come up with your own ideas.

WOW!That was beautiful!

bravo bravo bravo bravo bravo bravo bravo i loved it. it was heart warming and sweet you got a real nack for story writing make more of the story i loved . again bravo. and if it wouldnt be much trouble of you could i send you some ideas i have its if you want email me. bravo bravo bravo bravo troy

I loved it! Please do more its so rare to have a K/SSJ romance!