 ShinakaStar 2005-01-07 . chapter 3PLEASE CONTINUE!! I want to know how Anzu and Seto got to the way they were in the first chapter. And Atlantis2 is right; this story really does come across as a tear-jerker at some moments.
~~*ShinakaStar*~~ |
 Hermonthis 2004-07-31 . chapter 3In response to your comment: LoL. Goodness no, I don't think you're pessimistic. I am! =D
But this had to be one of the best lines:
"In the limo, someone was constantly shifting, someone's stomach was growling, someone else broke wind & it was definitely Mokuba who was making tiny squeaky sounds."
That and that little scene with Ms. Tanaka, very touching. Only one or two grammatical/spelling errors but it was not a hinderence to the flow of the story.
I also have to hand my congradulations to you Daisy, that was the most unique plot-idea I've seen, using an earthquake to get Seto and Tea together; even Mother Nature herself thinks they belong! (j/k, don't take that as an official shipper's stance either)
Anticipating your next chapter,
~Dragon Faere |
 Secono 2004-07-11 . chapter 1Thanks for reviewing me! Well I don't exactly know the answer to your question. This fic was just something that I thought up on a rainy day! Thanks! |
 NMint 2004-06-14 . chapter 3 I want to know what had happened to Tea so please continue and I like the Seto/Tea coupling. |
 Koruyuu 2004-06-12 . chapter 3Purely wonderful... your story is just a work of a genius... or rather close to one! ^^ Continue please |
 belle-fille1 2004-06-08 . chapter 3 Wow, that was very poetic, your summary for the story . . .sighs. . .
loved the description and emotion in this chapter! |
 CWolf2 2004-06-08 . chapter 3This is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 child of innocence 2004-06-07 . chapter 1Are you going to give credit to William Butler Yeats for the poem of his that you used in your summary? |
 Taichi Prime 2004-06-07 . chapter 3 This is so good! The first chapter nearly made me cry! I don't think anyones writing has come as close as that before! updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate (breathes deeply) nownownownownownownownownownow! |
 Atlantis2 2004-03-13 . chapter 2This is shaping up to be a spectacular fic and it's a shame that you haven't had the chance to update lately. I really like the idea you're creating here and the first chapter was almost a tear-jerker for me which is good for you. It takes quite a lot to tug at my heart strings and the whole situation you described really broke my heart. I hope the girl isn't who I think it is.
Anyway, please continue this fic as soon as you can. I for one know that real life intrudes far too often and can certainly forgive you even if you take a few more months to update. In my opinion, it'll be well worth it. I'll look forward to updates on this fic. |
 Vaz1201 2004-03-04 . chapter 2I'm so glad that you made this a Seto/Tea fic because there are les and less of those on this site,so update soon.
Vaz1201 signing off: Bye Bye |
 Hermonthis 2004-01-18 . chapter 2*stares in wonder* For your first fanfic, this is crazy-mad-awesome. I'm glad it's Tea/Seto. After reading the first chapter, it seemed that this pairing would suit it the best. (my 2nd choice would have been Ishizu) I wonder what happenned to Tea, there's such a profound sadness in their plight.
Wow, I hope you update soon. |
 Lunar Dragon 209 2004-01-16 . chapter 2I loved, hope you up-date soon. Sorry it took me so long for me to review, and read for that, but I've been busy.
Again loved and look forward to your next chapter!! |
 Darkness Falls1 2004-01-08 . chapter 2OH! this is a good fic! um...not to b mean but i don't get the first chapter ^^;hehehe..sry.. after readin the first chapter what i think is Tea might b paralysed or somthing but if i'm wrong or i aint suppose to know yet then just ignore me ^_^ but really i LOVE ur fic! update soon ^_^ |
 Azurite 2004-01-05 . chapter 2OOh! Chapter 1 had me hooked, and I'm still wondering what happened to Tea that she ended up in the state she did... *sigh* So sad...
Hey, the Seto/Anzu fanlisting, "Blue Eyes and Apricots" is almost up at my website; I'll give you a heads-up when everything is done, eh?
Keep up the good work! |