hey! I dont think its a sucky plot! i love them! The first one however didn't make too much sense. Soz. Just the truth.

I'm a nice person. This was really good and i can't wait to hear more. Daine and Numair are the best couple ever and the way that your writing this fanfiction, makes that expand even more. Don't let other people stop you from writing more of this good stuff.

Keep at it!

it is a ery good story who ever dosen't like it is crazy

This is really good I can't wait for more!

I think your story is fabulous. It is a great idea, creative, cute, and fun. Trust me, I know a good fic when I come across one. I have probably read thousands. And I went and checked on some of the fics of the people who flamed you, and most can't write worth a damn, and do the same old plot that everyone does. Please update. Don't punish yourself (and us, lol) for stupid idiots.

great i loved it! write more please!

ok you should totally continue. who cares if some people don't like your fic? i think it's great. but if you don't want to con. don't. if you do then more power to you. you should con. though. just my oppion

i loved it! loved it loved it loved it! i'm a HUGE d/n fan and i love fluff. con.!

i thought they wouldn't become lovers...

"mild mage"? don't you mean 'wild mage'?

haha, the mild mage. i

wadda hell! hu the heck said that it is bad? i'll kill em all! u r so like my twin! i love d/n fluff! it is by far my dfave couple! i love fics like dis! keep writing!

I just finished reading your last what if... I really liked it. I love Daine and Numair stories so you can put as much fluff in it and I'll still love it. I've added you to my Story Alert List so I'll be waiting for your next short story

I, for one, am greatly enjoying it =3
Please continue.

Whoa, "I don't have an account." is a dick-head. Pardon me for saying something like that but I think his/her (I shouldn't hesitate to call he/she 'it', after what it said) comment truly merrit the name. Plaese wait a momment whilst I fume on your behalf. God, "Plagarism"? The whole of fanfic.net could be considered plagarism and then we'd be up to our ears in law suits. Also "stolen"? I have rearead that scene enough times to know that you weren't copying directly from the book. I am disgusted with this particular reader. I am the first person to stand up for constructive criticism, but flat out insulting work like that is lower than low. I hope that you will be able to forget pig-head's comments and continue writing this fic (it really is very good).
I hope this makes you feel a little better.
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