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Naruto the cat king 2008-10-29 . chapter 9
Great story so far please update soon
Birga 2008-10-13 . chapter 9
excellent story, and hopefully not a dead one.

OOC, not really I mean how can an AU be in character after all
Lerris 2008-09-18 . chapter 9
It would be nice to see this finished...
Progos 2008-09-11 . chapter 9
You, sir, are brilliant. I hope and pray that my ego-stroking will entice you to continue this; it is one of the best Ranma 1/2 fanfics I have ever read.
Prustan 2008-08-22 . chapter 9
Enjoyable story, and it's a shame that you haven't written more. I think it's quite funny that the Amazons have been using Instant spring packets to simulate Shampoo's curse, and that they're putting Ryoga through the hell Ranma had in the series. As for the two ninjas Heaven and Thorn, I'd say Heaven is Kasumi, and Thorn is Kodachi. Am I right?
As for the stuff you ranted about, I don't care about the characters being OOC. It's fanfiction and they will be OOC. And I haven't noticed any spelling/grammer problems - that stuff only tends to register if it's really bad.
More please!
The BluOne 2008-08-10 . chapter 9
Hm. Well, this certainly is a different fic. First of all, I suppose I should point out the things that bug me. There really are only two.
First, and this is much less noticeable in later chapters, are the punctuation errors. Remember, the comma is your friend!
Second, you made a common 'Ryoga writers' mistake. You pointed out that one of the reasons he wants Ranma's guts is due to the 'last bread' stealing. However, Ranma didn't take the last bread, he took the last of the good bread (curry, etc). If you look in the manga, the chef offers more bread after that last piece (sweet-bean if I remember right). Just something I thought you might like to know.
On to the good stuff!
I really like all the extra things youve brought in. The key, serial killer Hibiki, and Nabiki's lightsaber... I mean Ki Blade.
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The plot is interesting, and has a lot of fun twists and turns.
Also, implied (at least, to me it seemed so) ninja Kasumi is AWESOME.
Don't take peoples complaints of out of characterness to seriously, especially with an AU fic like yours. You said they complained about Nabiki, but seriously, just the fact that she is a reincarnation of someone else gives you MILES of leeway. Your depiction of Akane is rather stereotypical, but I may be a bit biased about that (I
blood-angel 666 2008-06-07 . chapter 9
friggin brilliant stuff man...

dragons and kitsune have always really facinated me, and nabiki is one of the pairings in ranma i actually like.

this story has me hooked, and i really hope you update soon.
Fire Dragon Master 2008-04-06 . chapter 8
Tannius-sama, I humbly ask you to continue this fanfiction. I must post on this chapter since I have already posted on Chapter 9. You are one of my favorite writers, but you update far to infrequently to be put on my favorite authors list. This was the first of your stories that I have read, but in my humble opinion you are as good as deathgeneous, Dragon Man 180, Usagi-Hasano, and MadnessPersonified; all four of whom are on my favorite authors list. I would be humbled if you could find the inspiration to continue and be on my favorite authors list. This has been Fire Dragon Master, the loyal servant to the greatest of fanfiction writers.
Big Daddy Cool 2008-04-03 . chapter 9
Damn man! Thats a bad ** story and you haven't updated for like 2 years now! what the hell is wrong with ya, to l;eave us readers in such a cliff hangers! Please update soon!
moritynz 2008-03-20 . chapter 9
I would love to see where this goes, I really hope that you come back to finish it. I know how hard it is to write sometimes but I would really like to see how this ends.
Dlikee 2007-12-20 . chapter 9
love the story great ideas, too bad for tenchi (lol) would love too see it revived and updated
DirectorJuno 2007-11-27 . chapter 9
Very nice, love the concept and plot progression. I myself am currently writing a Ranma/Dragon fic, tho mine pales in comparison to yours, in plot, grammar, formation and length. But your story has given my inspiration for upcoming chapters of my own. I can see that you also know quite a lot about Dragons, I'm quite the fanatic, books, mythology, movies, games, all of it. Basically everything but art, because I have no artistic talent at all (and I've tried)

Its nice to see a like mind writing Ranma fics, Please find it in yourself to continue your writing, even if only on rare occasion. And take a little time to read mine, and please review, I'd really like your opinion on my idea, and progression.
Skunkboy 2007-11-20 . chapter 9
Truly wonderful. I hope you eventually continue this work of art.
Shlandria 2007-10-03 . chapter 9
This is a great story, keep it going!
Kinhoshi89 2007-09-27 . chapter 9
Please continue this. D: Even though it's been over a year and nearly half, please don't completely abandon it.
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