 Redzorin 2009-12-02 . chapter 3Strange freakin fanfic. |
 Deus-Ex-Machina 2009-12-01 . chapter 3Just recently found this story again. It's a good story, and I'd like to see where you go with it. I hope to see it updated soon, especially with all of the other updates you have been putting out lately.
Keep up the good work. Ja. |
 ranma hibiki 2008-01-11 . chapter 3*cackles* wonder what julia will think about being called auntie
>=D
...oh dear, that means that ranma has 3 cousins that are almost in as much trouble as him all the time, how will jade survive? |
 Celestial Indigo 2008-01-03 . chapter 3Nice setup for this story. I would have expanded on the incence portion of the fic, but it's still good.
What I'm a little curious about is Skuld's role here. What's her part here? Could this be the motivation that helps bring Nobel Scarlet to full fruition?
And this new twist saying that Ranma's a relitive to the Diggers? Wouldn't they have mentioned something by now about family?
I hope to see an update soon too. Keep up the writing. |
 Lerris 2008-01-02 . chapter 3While the pregnant Ranma genre is generally not my favorite, you do come up with a somwhat plausible reason for it. Overall, what you have so far is pretty good. In general though, I think you might have needed a loose outline to make the best of it. Of course, the general genre of having to fight evil amazons is pretty much covered. Good luck with what you write next. |
 Bobboky 2008-01-02 . chapter 3cool |
 Dragon Man 180 2008-01-02 . chapter 3Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see how the Tendo sisters take to Jade. |
 deitarion/SSokolow 2008-01-02 . chapter 3Even if it's short and heralds the end of your work on the story, it's better than nothing. Besides, it's quite well done.
Who was interested in continuing it? |
 Kabia-Duelist 2008-01-01 . chapter 3I must say that this story is intresting. I'd say continue it. |
 DarkRubberNeck 2008-01-01 . chapter 3Hm a very interesting story indeed ^_^ |
 mythicalprogrammer 2008-01-01 . chapter 2Dude... the fire thingy and the rescue and the "omg how can I ever repay you?" is so cliche. Other than that it's an interesting fan fiction and the pace goes pretty well. I'm glad that you updated probably mean you ain't depress any more? Anyway thanks for the fic get happy I guess. =] |
 ranger5 2008-01-01 . chapter 3It's so good to see an update. I definately look forward to more on this and your other stories. Hopefully on this one quickly (g) though I gotta admit I love all of your stories so far.
Personally, I thought the whole encounter with the Tendo sisters and Nodoka was well handled... particularly the Temple scenes.
Still lots of room for speculation as to the permanency of the curse ... or whether even if not locked Ranma won't have adjusted to it enough to prefer it ... especially with the bonds of motherhood. There's not much stronger than that ... even fatherhood pales in comparison ... at least IMHO. |
 Nysk 2008-01-01 . chapter 3Nice update, happy new years btw!
I look forward to more and glad to hear things are going well with your store! |
 Innortal 2008-01-01 . chapter 3Odd twist, but still a good one. |
 Rose1948 2008-01-01 . chapter 3I wish you all the best, hon. I liked where this was going. Sad to see you leave this story and all. Take care. |