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| aforiks 2003-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse"by the time she looked my way, i was gone'. how then did i know that she looked my way. i cannot tell about things i did not experience. i think that that sentence is best stated in the third person. "By the time she looked his way, he was gone'. Nice piece |