hey great chapter I wonder what happen to reccoome and I hope his ok and I hope Captain ginyu goes to HFIL to help the other ginyu force as well

hey great chapter I hope the kai can stop this evil Hellmon and Babidi are working together to make HFIL much worst then before I wonder how he will stop him. great update 8 soon

hey great chapter this guy is some kind of Devil and his name is Hellon and he gave the wizard it power to defeated the ginyu force and cell as well I wonder how will they stop him and will the supremem kai get help from the z warriors on earth and destroy this new evil force.

hey great story I read chapter 1 and 2 and 3 it was great and I wonder who is this guy he defeated Captain Ginyu and now gave that wizard new power and now I wonder where this guy came from and there is probably more two him then meets the eye. update you next chapter 7 soon

if you ask me, and you should, soul needs to kick devidil right where it really hurts. anyway, good chapter pawsy. look forward to the next one.

Good work. Can't wait to see the next chapter, and what Shin thinks of next. Can he save Babidi? Or will Spirit and its' minions reign supreme? Guess the answers are all in that crazy coconut of yours.

Shakes pawsy: WHERE'S BABBIDI-SAMMA! WHAT GONNA HAPPEN TO THE OTHER LOSER PEOPLE! :looks around in a paranoid way: NO ONE IS SAFE! :jumps out the closestes window: A!

pez: oh and by the way...just so you know we ..{the wildbohemianparty} are in charge of gaurding the h.f.i.l. we even have a certificate! :holds up cetificate: see!? so we are definately staying until the end oh and pawasy..the others told me to tell you that if any thing happens to the ones we protect we'll kill you ok? {oh and i would recomend bringing in the humans. because sayiagirl is getting very annoying about the whole 'humans are the puresert race in the universe thing}

Ah, this story gets more interesting!
Spirit seems like an odd fellow... I don't get him... er, it.
But since he takes a male form when on the physical realms, wouldn't that make him a him? O.o That stuff becomes confusing. 'It' could just sound like you're talking about something else...
>.< WAHH!! MY HEAD HURTS!
Alex: So... that place. And the dragons. Is it like the gods of 'Ah my Goddess'? Or is it more like the kai's?
Alex Ultra: I'm hungry.
Alex: A dark place of eternal torment and flames that don't burn and give no light. A forever seperation from heaven and sorrow forever. A place where souls are sent into despair for all eternity. This is one of the oldest description of Hell.
Alex Ultra: Thank you for that exerpt from... that one book... O.o What was it called again?
Alex: I don't know, it's been too long. O.o
Alex Ultra: Right...
Okay. And this has come to mind somewhere along the line, but did you know that the official name for the place where Babidi and Cell and the others went to is 'H.F.I.L' 'Home for Infinite Losers'. That's why it's a bit more civil, but it's your story. ^.^ Now I need to get food as I am hungry!!
Bringer of Hope and Creator of Worlds
Alex and Alex Ultra
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pez: b...babidi-sama? :suddenly bursts into tears: babidi-sama! it's my fault! :continues to cry:
speedwithlife: whoa. poor guy...wait a second...:gleam comes to her eye: if he could get babbidi. :shouts out the door: YO GUYS! SECRUOTY BREACH! I REAPEAT SECRUOTY BREACH! CODE RED! THIS IS NOT A DRILL! REAPEAT! THIS IS NOT A DRILL! THIS IS A CODE RED!
:8 other girls come in the door:
jyu-ni: what's up?
swl: guys someone is threating the h.f.i.l.. he's already gotten to babbidi.
tw: oh no!
yin: that's horrible!
yang: gods abouve
sayia: WAHOO! No h.f.i.l.'s! :everyone glares at her: what? you know i only care about humans! and gods know there not down there! they're too pure!
earthangenl: that's terrible!
dreamcather: hmm...dragons. :touches the dragon necklance she's wearing:
hershy: if anything happens to the sayeins. i WILL KILL!
pez: :sniffs and looks at pawsy: if you need any help just e-mail us... and pawasy? please just let everything tuen out ok!

Lookin' good. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow, this was an interesting chapter. Do keep making more of chapters.

Bringer of Hope and Creator of Worlds
Alex and Alex Ultra

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:speed stomps out and grabs babbidi by the shrit front:

speed:i just had a little talk with the ginyu force and i am VERY cross about what you did VERY VERY CROSS INDED! HOW DARE YOU! YOU LITTLE BASTERD OF A WIZARD I'LL KILL YOU! AGAIN AND THEN I'LL..:speed is cut off when pez grabs her collar and pulls her away from babiddi:

pez: leave babbidi- sama alone! he deserved to fight back :brushes babbidi off: it's ok babbidi-sama. you'll get away...but sir...what happend? why was your shrit bloodstained?

OOh! I like this one!

Oh, an a Mary Sue is the general term given to a fic that presents a girl who is proper and has special powers because of something terrible that happened long ago. Usually, it means that the main char doesn't hate anybody, but has the power to like, save the universe or something. It's used to say that it's really cheesy ;P.

Alex: Are you saying I'm a Mary Sue?
Alex Ultra: No, I'm saying that you're close. But you have nothing against hating people... [evil snicker].
Alex: Huh? Oh, I guess you're right! ^.^ Wow, I'm hyper today!
Alex Ultra: Oh, and Mary Sues usually have some special power that is given to them or that they are chosen to weild or are destined to have for some strange reason. And they usually find their Prince Charming somewhere along the line. X.x
Alex: Heh, that counts me out. No WAY I'm going to find a Prince Charming! Or, he wouldn't be quite so charming anyway. [Snickers] POW!! Hehe!
Alex Ultra: ARE YOU DONE YET!?!? [Nursing new bump on back of head] Well, that's my take on it. Mary Sue is the cheesy prissy special girl. Hope that helps.

OH, and I really like the story! Do keep it up! I want more please! PLEASE!?!?!?

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Heh, I'm a non-cusser too! But Hell is the name of a place, so it's okay when using it that way. Just not as an insult or a curse. Same with the name God, it's a name. Hell is even the name of a town somewhere in the US (though where it is, I have no idea... I just know it's somewhere in the mountains ^.^;). Oh, and I love the story!

I'm gonna read the next chapter now!

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