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2006-12-14 . chapter 1
Actually, moonlit seductress, it's "Hunnicutt". Two T's! NOBODY gets that right...it isn't "Honeycutt" either, though.
Rationale
2004-01-25 . chapter 3
i can't wait to see what happens next... should be interesting!!
Rationale
2004-01-25 . chapter 1
DUN DUN! i wonder what will happen next, this sound like it wil be a very good fic, cant wait to read it all!!
Sonar
2003-10-01 . chapter 3
Need some work on your spelling and never repeat the summary. Father Mulcahy and Sidney are their names. Spelling would help but you need some practice on your stories. Check the other mash stories and look off them
Moonlit Seductress
2003-09-27 . chapter 3
Awesome! This story is getting better and better. Thanks for not getting ** at me for my corrections, I've had people do that.
Corky Higgins
2003-09-27 . chapter 3
Wowzers...you know more German than me and I'm part German. Of course, no one in my family uses the "old Language" expect all my really old aunts and uncles...who I never see. In fact, I don't even know if they're still alive...hm...gonna hafta check into that. Anyways though. It's very good so far I think, very interesting. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to check back on it very soon.
Katie Malone
2003-09-27 . chapter 3
I know, you're probably getting tired of the typo thing, but you spelled Houlihan "Hoolahand". Good story, though.
Moonlit Seductress
2003-09-26 . chapter 2
Good work. This is a good story, so far.

A couple of spelling errors - don't take this as a flame, it's just to help. Klinger, Father Mulcahy, and Hunnicut.

Those are commen errors, so don't feel bad - they don't change the value of the story at all. Keep it up!
Lily D.W
2003-09-24 . chapter 1
This is great! Only one thing though - it's the 4077th, not the 4047th - I loved how you made B.J keep saying "I'm still awake," that's hillarios! More soon, I'll be waiting!
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