Please update again soon on this story as well. It is really good.

finish!

I like it, please finish it!

Hello,

This is a great fan fiction. I love it so much and I hope you decide to continue and you don't pull it. Please, please, please just keep on work on it I am so enthralled with the story that I may just cry if it gets pulled and never is updated again. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,

Macala A.

I enjoyed this chapter, glad you updated! The only thing that really stood out to me in this chapter, was you used the word companion a lot. Not a bad thing, it just is unusual so it stood out! :D

Great chpater really looking forward to the next one!

Nice chapter! The story so far is very sweet, I wonder what kind of drama you're set to dish out. Update ASAP, i'll be waiting :)

i love your story i cant wait to see what happens please dont pull the story its worth the long wait

I love this story can you please continue with this story. Plus

can Serena understand what Darien is about to say and can they

still be together after Darien is done talking please. Plus later on can Darien propose to Serena so that they can get married and she says yes please. Also can they have a child and

can he be faithful all through this story please. Please e-mail

me back at I would like to hear back from you please.

From,

Sarah Zitter

Update soon!

really good chapter! i loved it, but would have loved it more if it had a lemon in it, cant w8 4 more plz hurry and update soon!

ok i wanna where Darien from

why do you always cut it off like that

isn't cool at all

love chapter

more please

good chapter update soon

loved your story so far

oh jelousy with darian n zane lol

updat soon please xcharlx

Wow what a chapter! well handled. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Wow 6 stories at once! You certainly know how to multitask! ;0)

LOVE IT love it love it!

Aww, they just don't seem to realyl be getting any breaks, do they?

I would like to point out one thing - Serena's cahracters has changed over the course of the past eight chapters. She starts out as a confident woman, but lately it has seems a bit withdrawn and in need of protection. I understand it is for the story, but just be careful not to give her character a total flip.

I am totally loving this story, and I cannot wait for more! I love how original this is, and Drew is so funny! Where are Mina and Ami?

Can't wait for more!

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