I don't think your original characters are out of place at all! And the Final Fantasy VII characters still command spotlight perfectly! In my opinion, I actually really like the OC's you've added, and how you managed to create Chaos's character. I definitely think you should try to continue on with this story, it's original, funny, and overall really one of the best works I've read here on FanFiction! SO OMG YOU BETTER CONTINUE THIS AND RECEIVE BILLIONS OF COOKIES OR I WILL FIND YOU AND FORCE YOU TO CONTINUE IT! ;D

Your profile is VERY long winded. Its all about everything on you and making you sound very appealing to yourself and your viewers. but at least your not arrogant and self righteous anymore.

hee hee. chaos was laughing. ^_^

wow...i havmt reveiwed for the first chap! that is very weird. well anyway, are you live over there!? just askin

awesome, awesome, awesome!

your original characters were really good as well... keep up the excellent work!

omg! Awesome story! Please update soon!

Omg! That was awesome! Please keep writing!

...gonna write more..plz do..

...i like Marsellis..^_^..

this reveiw is for ch.3:
ok i know that chaos has a materia (aka. shiny shiny)but in this story who took it

very good story

There's a lot of Greek/Roman mythology thrown in here, I've noticed, aside from just Ares. It kind of all seemed just to appear in this chapter, although I'm sure it was in the other ones as well.

I don't know. A hydra just really brought it to my attention. 'Course, it's really late where I'm at, so I might have easily missed a lot in the first two chapters. I hope that's not the case.

Reminded me of fighting the Hydra on Kingdom Hearts 2...stupid vanquish command.

Great work so far ^^

~rinna

Ok..i'm gonna put my foot down here and say, no demand that you write more of this story...Otherwise, well i'll be reallys ad and you don't like a new reviewer mad do you?

Its so rare to find a good ffII story let alone a great stroyline...this is just great. i'm hoping and praying that you update soon! feel free to e-mail me!

please update

Its so funny - i like chaos in this! Continue it! Its so cool!

firstly i have to say congradulations because u are the first person i have reviewed. i don't normaly but i thought u deserved it lol. i have read at least 3 of ur stories and so far i think u kick **. your really good. keep it up cuz ur stuff rocks.