This was really good.I thought you had the characters written nice.

Oh, a slick and compelling read. It makes you wonder what it's like to be all hum and metal and bolts, when you used to be something else completely.

What happens next?

WHOAH!! So original, so haunting-- God, I've got goosebumps...

Anyways, awesome chapter, man. The torment was real, the apathy was real, the suspension was so thick you could cut it with a knife.

I'll definately be looking for more of this, you're style is beautiful.

God. This is absolutly wonderful. Please continue this fic, for it has SO much possibility and actually EXPLAINS why the character lived after Ep. 26, along with being so beautifully written. ^_^
Mew

Very good story, I can't wait until the next chapter:)