 Tawnyfeather 7/3/06 . chapter 1Uh, there is a section for Redwall you know. Otherwise good job! |
 Selina 5/17/00 . chapter 1 Cool story Rose! You have a natural talent for writing. Get a book published babe!
You really would go far in the book business! Take it from me, you rock! |
 Dyrne Alaran 4/17/00 . chapter 1 Jus' in case you didn't know, there's now a Redwall category...y'may wanna shift these over to there. |
 Ambrose 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very creative. I hope to see more of your work here. |
 Dina Martha 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Hello! Its looks very good, Helena! I'll read it properly soon... |