This story was awesome.

I have nothing coherent or useful to say. I can however tell you that I loved this story. As much of a rabid Senshi/Shitennou shipper that I am, I didn't even care that the senshi only had cameos, I was enjoying myself too much to care. There are so many lines that are just pure win! Good job on fleshing out the characters of 5 of the very few men in BSSM. I also enjoyed the yaoi implications, just makes everything more hilarious. And future insane King Endymion is win!

Technically a very good story, but the plot just annoyed me, maybe it's because it's one but with a better premise you could get a much better story.

"That bad hair colors hurt baby Jesus?"




Best. Jadeite line. Ever.

This fic is Emperor of Awesomeness.

Complete and Utter Brilliance!
This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read in the Sailor Moon fandom.
All of the little bits come together to be completely perfect!
I love your characterizations of the Shittennou and Mamoru. They all seem so very real.
That last like be Neff is really quite epic.
All of the little Malachi/Mamoru bits and Malachi/Zory were deliciously hilarious and now I wish more people would write that as a paring... there's just not enough opportunities for slashiness in the Sailor Moon Fandom.
One of the best things I've read in a long time~

I think this is one of the best pieces of Sailor Moon fanfiction I have ever read.

I love Mamoru and it is so refreshing to not only read a fic where he kicks ** but is also the main character. The crazy frat-boy Shitennou being in it was a wonderful bonus. The characterization the humour the angst the Mamo-torture was and the shounen-ai/yaoi hints were all incredible. (I happen to be a diehard 2x1x2 fan of GW).

Everything about this story was brillant and I very much wish there was a sequel. Thank you so very much for writing this story!

I have to admit: I found this story because someone favorited mine and I was going through her list. I was - startled - several times by the course of the story and there were times I nearly gave it up. However, I nearly ** myself laughing at the end. I did. It was pure brilliance.

I just thought you should know that I enjoyed it immensely.

wow great story! i totally love the fact that the story was completely focused on the shittenou and mamoru. i think it takes a lot of balls to almost completely ignore the senshi. stories without a mamo/usa centric plot get less readers, but u guys just did what u wanted, and i loved every minute of reading it. =)

Oh my! Despite poor Mamoru receiving more beatings than anyone should in a lifetime *snuggles Mamo-chan*, I really really like this fic! It's angsty and funny at the same time, and I especially like how you've made the Shitennou into full-fledged characters. Your plot was also brilliant, I did not see that end coming at all.

I have to admit I'd love to see these guys meet the Senshi, mostly because I think the interaction between the two groups would be absolutely hilarious... Anyway, thanks very much for writing this, I had a blast reading it! :~D

This is really one of the best combinations of humor and angst that I've read in a while. I hope you write more about these characters someday.

("...that's the second time I've heard my voice come out of your pants," Malachi said warily)

That is the funniest thing I've read, probably ever. This is great!

I LOVE this story !! I just finished Chapter 7, Part 8, whatever you wanna call it, and I love it !! This is the only fanfic I've read that wasn't an Usagi-Mamoru storyline, and I'm actually surprised that I'm not disapointed. I thought it'd include Usagi at some point, so I kept reading it, then I saw your Author's Note saying she wouldn't come in, and I wasn't upset. This is a wicked story without the lovey dovey stuff I usually crave. Favourite part so far, "I have magic sparkly powers" HAHA !! I love how all of their conversations are so quick witted and I love Malachi and Mamoru's relationship, and in no way do I think it's gay. I think it's sweet how Malachi is trying to soothe Mamoru like Rei's always tried to soothe Usagi, it's about time someone comforted Mamoru !! Alright-e, can't wait to finish it, ja ne

This story is my favorite fanfiction of all time. I have been reading fanfiction for many years now and I have yet to come across a better one than "Bleed". This is my fifth time reading this and I never grow tired of it. I love the way the characters are portrayed and the whole plotline does excellent justice to Mamoru and the generals. There are not enough stories about those five and especially with Mamoru being so empowered. You both added such emotion into the characters and made them into what they should have been in the actual series. Do not listen to anyone who tells you otherwise, you both are fantastic writers and I hope that you continue to write. The fanfic world would be severely diminished if you stopped. Maybe you could even make a sequel to "Bleed", these characters are too strongly developed for them to just be limited to one story. Think about it...
Thank you,
-BonovoxSM

WOW. definitely long. definitely worth it. I was scared at the last chapter that you haven't updated since 2006. Phew. You did.

So much angst and drama. I daresay you succeeded in your task. It was excellent. Edge of my seat the whole time. I kinda want a bit more of Usagi in there but that's just a whim. You don't have to fulfill it. The story is great without it.

Totally worth my first ever review. Oh and I think you're both awesome for sticking to your story and not being phased by unreasonable critics.

Thank you.

I don't think I can really write a review for how much I loved and /needed/ this story. The Shitennou have always been my favorite characters, but you're right, you hardly ever see them in fanfics except as boytoys for the Senshi. (As an aside, I've never particularly liked the Senshi, I always watched SM for the villains)

Thank you, thank you for writing a story about the Shitennou, for the Shitennou's sake. You made it so real, so believable. The moments of humor were perfect. Everyone was characterized so well, so different from their Shitennou counterparts and yet you could still recognize the pieces in them. It was amazing.

I love both your writing styles. As soon as I finish this, I am poised to go tearing through the rest of your author page. I'm half-hoping you have a sequal to this fic... but mostly I'm hoping not. It's perfect as it is. I almost don't /want/ them to go back to Japan, I want them to be silly drunken fratboys forever. This is one story I'm definitely saving into my personal files. Thank you again. You did good, both of ya.

...Now, for a few more frivelous comments on behalf of my squealing inner fangirl.

I am IN LOVE with Malachi. Kunzite was always my favorite, and you just went and made it ten times worse! Too bad he's gay, huh? ;)

Why did the future Kunzite have pink hair? That amused me SO much. I'm curious as to who the Shitennou were in the future before it was altered, but I think our favorite nutcase king was right, it's better left to the imagination.

...And lastly, imagine me swearing at you. Now the Shitennou are TALKING to me again. -.- Pardon me while I go attempt to dig up more fanfics as good as this one, which I'm sure won't happen.

Thank you both.

~Wingleader Sora Jade/ArchangelUnmei