It has been months since you posted, but I hope you see this. DOnt stop WRITING! I find your stroy awesome. It has been a while since I played, and the names are unfamiliar, but I still love it. Please keep writing. I beg of you. Please!

-Sincerely,

Chris/Otijori/A fan

Yuck. I am repulsed by your choice of pairings, Bhree. Haha.

O! SOGARO! Isn't he the guy with...the eyes?

Oh, yeah. Good chapter, Bhree.

HAHAHAHA! God, Bhree...I thought Josei was like a broken record but I never woulda guessed...

So that was Aizou? I myself have never seen SNIT, but I HAVE heard of it. I must go find a site that it's still available from...

Kei bands! *laughs immaturely* Nothing wrong with this chapter. Nothing at all. Forward we go.

Sure. I'm just now getting around to reviewing your stuff. Think iof it as your belated birthday gift. _;

This was a pretty good representation of the Musashi brother's duel. Better than most I've seen, and I've seen most of them, if you know what I mean.

Edit it, cause I saw a few misspelled word here and there. I liked the funny bits...try to do that for every chapter, okay? Hearts for you.

Ewe Forgott 2wo teel ho rote teh sawng ewe namd teh chapteer aftar. Butt Ai liked et.
Marhk iz ay laymer todai. thatz whi heez speeling funy. !1

IT'S ABOUT TIME! ) T'was quite good. You're showing your polish. Please don't delay so much next time, okay? Physics is HARD, so I'm too busy working sometimes to talk to you.

WOW! Great Chapter! I saw a couple places where a word was out of place or it didn't makesense, but other than that... WOW!

i think you need to get rid of the and in And Joe secretly agreed with her"

(sniggers) Lol!
Dunno what to say...I have jet lag...woof...it was funny...even in my dopily deluded state of mind...congrats.

I was thinking this was good until all the original characters kept popping up. That totally spoiled it.

HAH! NOT SO COCKY NOW, ARE YOU HOTSU! HAHAHA! Brie. You said yesterday you'd finished like, 4 chapters! GET HER DONE!