i absolutly loved this story it was awsome and kept me on the edge of my seat :)

A truly well done story.

I know this story was posted a few years ago, but I have only just found it (I spotted it it someones faves).
I'm so glad that I found it, and that you kept it up on this site.It was so well written, like a true Star trek fic (and yes, your Wes was awesome - as were the new characters)
I loved the story - simple, but very effective. The feelings, actions and everything you wrote played with the readers mind and held me to the end of the story.
Hob x
ps. Story added to my faves too!!

hi, i absolutely love this story (i'm only on ch. 25 as of yet) but i have one problem. everything is perfect except for one consistent thing that is getting on my nerves. you keep calling Robin Wallce "Mister."

"Good to have you back, Mister Crusher, Mister Wallace," Picard stared at Briyen for a long moment, then decided the time for questions was later.

she is a girl, right? wouldn't it make sense to call her Miss?

just a little note from me on something you should i guess work on. or fix. or sumthing.

Wow! Great story! Took me awhile to read but very well written! I love a good Wesley fic! Keep it up! Cudos!

I really like this story. I tried to read it a little while ago, but gave up at about chapter six or something. But now i have sat down and read it beginning to end, i love it.

I too and a Wesley lover and a Wesley hater. I havent read any Star Trek books with him in it though, so i can't really agree or disagree with you on that point. I am more of a Wesley lover though, even when he is being the biggest geek in the world... correction, universe...

You have a ver unique stly of writting and i really like it. Keep writing, and please can you do me a favor? Can you write a sequel?!

Key of Darkness!

good analogy.

That was one of the best put together stories I've ever read. Admarible lack of curse words, too.

Thanks for writing and posting it.

I hate it when people randomly post messages to stories that have long since been left alone, but hey...what the heck ne? Very nice story you have there, I don't tend to read ST:TNG fics seeing as my main focus turned over to anime some time ago but it was wonderful to read your fic - I grew up on ST:TNG and I loved Wesley when I was a kid...looking back I realized how much of a prat they made him in the series, but the books you mentioned are a saving grace for his character. I adored Strike Zone, but it might have had a great deal to do with Jaan - who you characterized very nicely. I was a bit shocked at your twist near the end, it wasn't exactly something I had expected this fic to lead up to, but it did make sense. In retrospect, it almost would have been better to make them older...in a way a little less likely to find "death".

A very well written fic. I give you extra points for it being a well written Wesley fic. I'm not really sure why Wesley gets a bad wrap (okay, uberkid saves the day) but he can be a great character when it's good material. Please write more stories (especially pertaining to Wesley) because I find that you have a good style.

Interesting story. :)

nice story. It was kinda hard catching up, since I haven't seen your story for some time. I had to skip a few chapters because it was confusing getting back to were I left off reading.

By the way, nice ending. I loved it.

Good luck on your next posts.

Thanks a million for sharing such a great story - a fantastic time all the way through! Well done!
Perhaps a typo - Beverly's eyes are blue (and a very nice shade of it). ;-)
Totally looking forward to your next post.

Yay! I've been wondering when I'd see an update. I loved it. It was so well written and put Wesley in a positive light. *

wow, great few chapters there. Like Briyen getting in on the escape action. Hopefully they'll get something through to the Enterprise. Riker better knock some sense into Picard so he'll go see Beverly . Keep up the great work!