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| Sis2ACsrSalad 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis was extremely well written! Bravo. I agree with an earlier review, how every word commanded attention. The format worked very well with the genre of the story...I loved watching how Selene and Micheal interacted...How he tricked her. She needs him now. Needs the sun and its rays, By the way, BEAUTIFUL descprition as to Micheal emulating the sun for Selene...And ulitmately, just needs HIM like he will always need HER, and nothing else. Thank you :) |
| lovefighter 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abusethat was odd. but nice |
| marmalo 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseyou had my attention at almost every word-gteat story |
| Venus Smurf 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. This was powerful and clever, and I loved it. |
| burningnostalgia 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseIt so happened that I was looking through the story links I've kept and haven't touched since, and I stumbled upon this one. Brilliant. 'She harbored no love in her heart' worked really well for the whole fic. And the end, well, it brought a grin to my face. +fave |
| aquamum 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was powerful reading. I love that they are intent on discovering their true feeling an don't have to hide them in the shadows of thier hearts any more. Thanks for writing a great story. |
| thexgreatxtriplexc 2006-08-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. That rocked. I love it. |
| Questioning Destiny 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWow that was ** AWESOME I very nice portrayle of Selene, and michael... You probably don' care but Selene is 600+ years old...anyways |
| The Velvet Rain Drops 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAww that was so sweet at the end !! I loved it, it is an instant favorite ! |
| spikeangelus 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abusewow very discripetive but cool! |
| AngryTolkienPurist 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's just so... aw |
| Specks 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThe ending made the story great for me, and I loved the subtext. This has definitely been one of the sublter pieces I've read in fandom and I truly did appreciate it. Bravo. My only gripe, and it's probably a small thing, but I didn't think she should have said "I don't harbor love..." out loud. Seemed a little overboard. But other than that, I really really liked this piece. |
| Brutal Moonshine 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abusenot cute but not scary just rite you kept them in character its great ~Al |
| eridani 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is really magnificent writing. The 'she harboured no love in her heart' motif was put to very effective use. I think you did a really excellent job of capturing Selene's character and then moving your own portrayal of her beyond the mould. You've done something quite unusual here- rather than telling a developmental story of Selene overcoming her recalcitrance to voice her feelings, you've taken the other path and shown that it doesn't really matter whether she does or not. It's a subtle break with convention that worked perfectly for Selene's character. The unencumbered style really worked well for the atmosphere, as well as showing you have good control over words. Hope I can read more from you. |
| Chou Hime 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseOhoo!THAT is what I call a truly Great fic! My Gd, that was awsome! |