love you sabam, favourite fanfic ever in the 5 or so years i've been reading them, its very unfortunate that you've decided to quit writing. i believe you have great skill at it and would love to see more, maybe a continuation of ch. 14, what the next 9 months were like or whatever.

woot, awesome, i loved it again. still good, you still gots it. not that it changed after 5 years but its great. you outta put them both back up so more people can read them, seeing as how almost nobody checks back through the old stuff; a few pages, maybe, 30+ pages, uh...no.

loved it

I love your story, it's really cute... but i don't believe that Sponge Bob is the ugliest thing you've ever seen.. I'd say Yvon of the Yukon is about 12 times uglier.

Well...eh. It's easy to tell that this was written before leather and lace. And it's not bad...I just love the other so much!

lol, excited fo r this chapter are we?

I did love it btw..so cute.

i realy like how this story ended with the whole snapshots thing

Nice ending, I was a little confused on whose viewpoint it was at first. Ah, I'll miss their banter, it was... interesting. Great job, I'll finish your reading your other stories soon.

Ahh.. the horrors of Kraft dinner! :O This is the only time I could ever think horribly on mac and cheese.
That banter between Squall and Rin in this chapter cracked me up, especially that bit about not having sex and Squall begging?! XD
Geez.. father and daughter argument was seriously over the line. I literally cringed at the things they said..
Whoo, this was another good chap. ^^

Heh, so her dad finally knows the truth. Dang, he was a bit harsh..
I know this actually relates to what happened at the end of the last chap, but I found it sort of odd that Rinoa was mad at Squall, instead of crying and worrying because he got hurt - but then again, she's OOC in this fic, I keep forgetting that.
Damn that Spongebob song! It's annoying but funny.

That is the best fan fic I have ever read!
Please for gods sake keep up the good work.
Ill be waiting for any more of your stories.

SO they named her Riana did they? I like that name its so pretty. Oh and I didn't quite get the ending, but oh well. I got half of it, but then I've never been able to fully functionally read italics, without confusing everything, so yeah. Nice job!

kids are annoying.

go rinoa

their arguement is funny,