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| Marie Nomad 2007-12-11 ch 3, | abuseI love it! I love how you incorporated Yamcha and Tien in it and while making complete sense! It's funny and I love how Tien made himself look like his own father was Saiyanman! Hee hee. I hope you write more fics like this. |
| Anime ADHD 2005-08-17 ch 3, | abusehehe this is really good!! |
| SweetGirl14 2005-07-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...HAHAHAHAHAH! |
| MadnessLover 2005-07-13 ch 3, | abuse... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA EMBLEM HAHAHAHAHAHAHAhahahaha... HAHAAHA. thats hilarious. Never say that coming. hahaha. Saiyaman isnt that bad if we would get rid of the crappy poses and the antannae. Maybe get a black helmet... hm hold on i gotta picture that look... hm... um... its... better?... |
| Firehedgehog 2005-03-31 ch 3, | abuseheh he heh |
| Sk8er7 2005-03-13 ch 2, | abuselol, saiyaman... |
| Blaze S. 2005-02-13 ch 3, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE! Fairly Good Story Line But A Bit Confusing...anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!THANKS! |
| Elenek 2004-07-22 ch 3, | abuseThis was cute. I really enjoyed the first chapter with Videl talking to Yamcha. And the excuses Yamcha gave for not training her were a riot. The superman thing was amusing. It was just really good. Your piece had very natural conversations. It did not get to mired down in everything else. It was very origional and a much different spin on the entire Saiyaman thing. Thank you for writing. -El- |
| limelie 2004-05-23 ch 3, | abuseThat was kinda weird in a good sorta way. |
| Gohan00 2004-01-21 ch 3, | abusevery good but update soon please |
| CrimsonKitty89 2003-12-30 ch 3, | abuseFUNNY! |
| Rogue1615 2003-12-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseThat has to be one of the most hilarius endings to the goofup i call 'saijaman'... Later, Rogue |
| Satan's Advocate 2003-12-27 ch 3, | abuse:Takes a deep breath: That...was...so...CUTE! I was laughing so hard with Tien and the emblem thing! A diamond engraved S, yeah right! Anywho, I'm just saying that was to cute for words. ~Jay |
| SmacksKiller 2003-12-12 ch 3, | abuseIt's hilarious!! |
| I DO NOT OWN DBZ 2003-11-19 ch 3, | abuselove it |