u need to add more please i hate it when people leave cliff hangers and dont update unless they have a good reason but other wise i think the story is great so far

great story but who is morris

you must update this story! and very soon I read the old version and it was very good.

thats so sad but you should continue with the story
also please e-mail me when you update
animechick7645@
thank you

Oh dang, both Lucy and simon have it rough. Pwease continue ^_^

Continue, continue, continue! Please keep going...Can't wait for the next chapter. UPDATE SOON! ^__~

-Raven

this story is okay, but what did kevin do?

This is really nice, CeruleanOctober. You've set a quiet, peaceful mood that contrasts beautifully with the inner turmoil of your chracters, and these two chapters have that nice polish that comes with a rewrite. Excellent job!

I like it better already! Kevin seems mean, but not so outrageous as before. I think I will like this version more than the last!

that was pur-fect I love it!

Hey, it's great to see you back. I'll be waiting for the rest of the revamped "After the Rain".

Nice job with the improved version, Cerulean! I'm looking forward to more!

Hey, I was wondering why you hadn't updated this in awhile! Nice revamp.

It's overdone, both Kevin being abusive and Simon being gay - his lover being Morris, but I don't mind too much when its done well. And this is done well.

Ugh! I don't mind slash, but EVERY time Simon is gay, is lover is always Morris! Damn that is so annoying. Go ahead make him gay, I have questioned his sexuality myself anyway. But for God's sake...,Morris?