 karakot 2006-09-07 . chapter 10 you do that mickel is going to slowely kill kraven if he does what you are insinuateing(sp?). that will be o so lovely. please give detales.
karakot |
 X-Over 2004-05-12 . chapter 11Interesting crossover story you've have here. I look forward to reading what happens next. Please continue; write more very soon. :) |
| Dr Gonzo 2004-03-11 . chapter 5 Now that I have ** off the Barbarian all I need to do is get rid off the ignorant and simple minded and I will have made FF.net a better place to lurk. |
| Zantac the Barbarian 2004-03-08 . chapter 5 That's it! I'm boycotting the rest of this story. It's giving me eyestrain! |
| Zantac the Barbarian 2004-03-08 . chapter 4 More of the same you really have to take my advice here otherwise all your sentences will continue to look just like this |
| Zantac the Barbarian 2004-03-08 . chapter 3 Great story-telling. But, you have GOT to use more punctuation! |
| Bolo 2004-03-07 . chapter 11 I'm not sure how far you plan to go with this but if anyone can mess up a plan its Xander. The unexpected tends to happen around him. If any body can save Amy its Xander or Soul if anything. |
| Louie Pastiche 2004-03-06 . chapter 2 Yes; it's quite probable that Michael and Selene will initially misunderstand Oz and Xander's meddling. But, there's only so long that the first pair will be able to fight off the vamps and lycans, on their own. It's a situation very similar to the one Buffy had with the Order of Taraka. No matter how many she might slay, they'd keep coming so long as there was a contract on her. And, the same fanaticism exists among the "Underworlders." Well-done characterization, all around! |
| Louie Pastiche 2004-03-06 . chapter 1 Xander in New York City, making like Nick Fury. I love it! |
| jayesh 2004-02-05 . chapter 1 Very good story .. looking forward to more :) Also just a hint ;) make xand an immortal :P how do the death dealers and weres react to a being that heals cuts as fast as they are made and is generally hellaciously fast with a sword :)
just my ramblin :) |
| Bolo 2004-02-03 . chapter 6 pretty good but I would have liked Xander to have held his own alittle better. He has been fighting for years now and at least he can take the hits. |
| M. Kearney 2003-09-29 . chapter 1 *snip* Tonight I was selling a steaming cold glass of whup-** and they looked like they were aching for a pint. *end snip*
You should warn a person before you do that! I was reading this at work (I know) and had to clench my jaw to keep from laughing out loud. Good story. |
| M. Kearney 2003-09-29 . chapter 1 *snip* Tonight I was selling a steaming cold glass of whup-** and they looked like they were aching for a pint. *end snip*
You should warn a person before you do that! I was reading this at work (I know) and had to clench my jaw to keep from laughing out loud. Good story. |
| WBH21C 2003-09-29 . chapter 1 Wow, great start! |
| ParadigmShifter 2003-09-29 . chapter 1 Your post at the XZ got my attention, and the story lived up to my expectations.
Xander acted well, remaining 'in character' as far as I was concerned... so I think you did a good job.
For a moment I did wonder if the 'Matrix' was going to appear, but I must say that this has me wanting more. |
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