That was utterly cute! KAWAII!

sweet!

How very YUMMY! I just adore this couple! This
is also a well worded fic. Your a good writer! Keep it up!

*glomps* EE! Pretty shounen-ai-ness! Great fic!

wow. Really nice.
I loved your writing style.

This is truly a jem. It's very funny, it's a bit erotic (like Gojyo), & cute (like Hakkai). I love this couple also, so it's the perfect combination. And don't worry, I think you did an outstanding job on the characters. I could really imagine Gojyo trying to get Hakkai drunk ^_^ Keep up the good work!

;)

I really liked this story. It got me thinking too. Gojyo said he'd never take another man to his bed right? It occured to me that could be interpeted that the only man he'd ever take to his bed from that point on would be Hakkai! Such a relevation made me dance! So thank you for your story! (Of course now that I had this relevation, all my Sanzo/gojyo fav fanfictions seem less plausable).

*Shivers* This fic...is so wonderfully delicious... You characterize Gojyo just as I imagined he would be... *Bookmarks and sighs happily*

I love the way you portray the tension between those two, the desire and uncertainty! There's always so much going on just below the surface...even in a humor bit, it's still there.